Perfume— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và thể hiện cảm xúc cá nhân, nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác (ví dụ: 'compliments' nên là 'compliment', 'essential parts' nên là 'an essential part'). Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng đúng số nhiều và số ít, đồng thời tránh lặp từ không cần thiết để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really like perfume. I enjoy it when people compliment how I smell, which makes me feel more confident. For me, wearing perfume is an essential part of my daily routine, and I can't imagine going a day without it.

Sugerencia: Bạn trả lời trực tiếp nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa chính xác (ví dụ: 'used' nên là 'use', 'more confidence' nên là 'more confident'). Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi lặp lại ý trước đó. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lặp ý.

Ejemplo: Yes, I use perfume every day as part of my routine because it makes me feel more confident. Moreover, I enjoy receiving compliments on my scent, which boosts my mood.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngắt câu và ngữ pháp (ví dụ: câu cuối không hoàn chỉnh, 'interact with much' không đúng). Bạn nên luyện tập cách nối câu và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

Ejemplo: It depends on the person. If they are very special to me and it's their special occasion, I would consider buying perfume as a gift. However, since perfume can be expensive, I usually don't buy it for people I don't know well.

Sugerencia: Bạn đã trả lời trực tiếp nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng (ví dụ: 'it it' lặp lại, 'a luxurious items' sai số nhiều, 'than' nên là 'then'). Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp để câu trả lời chính xác và tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think perfumes are definitely expensive because they are considered luxury items. In my opinion, if a perfume is not costly, its quality might not be very good.

× Like I love it when people compliments on how I smell, and it's even better than when people compliments on my looks or my outfits.

✓ Like I love it when people compliment on how I smell, and it's even better than when people compliment on my looks or my outfits.

The verb 'compliments' is incorrectly used with the plural subject 'people'. The correct verb form is 'compliment' to agree with the plural subject. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× And I think it's just an essential parts of my day that I can't miss.

✓ And I think it's just an essential part of my day that I can't miss.

The noun 'parts' is plural but should be singular 'part' because it refers to a single essential element. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I can't go a day without spring perfume.

✓ I can't go a day without spraying perfume.

The verb 'spring' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'spraying' to indicate the action of applying perfume. This is an incorrect use of verb form related to prepositions.

× Like I said, I used perfume almost everyday, like a daily routine of my because I felt like it just made me more confidence.

✓ Like I said, I use perfume almost every day, like a daily routine of mine because I feel like it just makes me more confident.

The past tense 'used' is incorrect because the action is habitual and ongoing, so present tense 'use' is appropriate. 'Everyday' should be two words 'every day'. 'My' should be 'mine' to indicate possession. 'Felt' should be 'feel' and 'made me more confidence' should be 'makes me more confident' to use correct adjective form. These are past tense and adjective usage errors.

× And I also love it when people compliments me on my on how I smell.

✓ And I also love it when people compliment me on how I smell.

The verb 'compliments' should be 'compliment' to agree with the plural subject 'people'. Also, 'on my on how I smell' is incorrect; 'on how I smell' is correct. This is a subject-verb agreement and sentence structure error.

× Well, it really depends on the people I'm giving the gift to.

✓ Well, it really depends on the people to whom I'm giving the gift.

The phrase 'the people I'm giving the gift to' ends with a preposition which is acceptable in informal speech but can be improved by placing the preposition before the relative pronoun: 'to whom'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and prepositions.

× Like if they are really special to me and it's their special day, I would give them a perfume because as you know, it's quite expensive and I would not go out of my way to buy it for someone I'm not really.

✓ Like if they are really special to me and it's their special day, I would give them a perfume because, as you know, it's quite expensive and I would not go out of my way to buy it for someone I don't really interact with much.

The sentence ends abruptly and lacks the verb 'interact' in the negative present tense 'don't really interact'. This is a sentence structure and present tense issue.

× Well, definitely it it is expensive because I feel like it's a luxurious items.

✓ Well, definitely it is expensive because I feel like it's a luxurious item.

The noun 'items' is plural but should be singular 'item' to agree with the singular article 'a'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× Like if it's not expensive than I think the quality is not really good.

✓ Like if it's not expensive, then I think the quality is not really good.

The conjunction 'than' is incorrectly used; the correct conjunction is 'then' to indicate consequence. This is an incorrect conjunction use.