Perfume— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答不够连贯，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议回答时结构清晰，避免重复和犹豫，使用完整句子表达观点。

Ejemplo: Yes, I like perfume, but only certain fragrances. Some scents are unpleasant to me, so I avoid those.

Sugerencia: 回答简短且语法不准确。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并适当扩展细节。

Ejemplo: I don't usually wear perfume daily, but I like to spray it on my clothes occasionally because it lasts longer.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清。建议使用正确的句子结构，清晰表达意图，并适当说明原因。

Ejemplo: Yes, I would buy perfume as a gift for my friends on their birthdays because I think it's a thoughtful present.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法和表达错误，内容不够具体。建议用完整句子表达观点，并具体说明原因。

Ejemplo: Yes, some perfumes from big brands are expensive, which I think is reasonable because of the quality of ingredients and manufacturing process.

× I like some fragrance icing doesn't smell well and I hate it.

✓ I like some fragrances; some don't smell well and I hate them.

这里的fragrance应该用复数形式，因为说的是多种香味。icing应为some，且句子结构不完整，需分开表达。

× No, I almost don't use it, but I like uses on my clothes, not on my body.

✓ No, I almost don't use it, but I like to use it on my clothes, not on my body.

动词use前应使用不定式to use，不能直接用uses。

× Yes I will, when my friends are B are on birthday I will choose a perfume which suit him as a gift.

✓ Yes, I will. When my friends have birthdays, I will choose a perfume which suits them as a gift.

friends是复数，birthday应用复数birthdays；动词suit应与复数主语friends保持一致，改为suit them。

× I will choose a perfume which suit him as a gift.

✓ I will choose a perfume which suits him as a gift.

关系代词which指代单数perfume，动词suit应加-s，变为第三人称单数形式。

× Well some big brands perfume are very expensive.

✓ Well, some big brand perfumes are very expensive.

brands perfume结构不正确，应改为brand perfumes，brand作形容词修饰复数perfumes。

× I think it is reasonable because the films make and the A origin and me manufacture are expensive.

✓ I think it is reasonable because the film making, the origin, and the manufacturing are expensive.

句子结构混乱，films make应改为film making，A origin应为the origin，me manufacture应为manufacturing，且用逗号分隔并列成分。