Teacher— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答时句子结构不够连贯，有些句子过短且断裂，建议使用连词使表达更流畅，同时避免重复表达“helped me a lot”，可以用更具体的描述来丰富内容。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have a favourite teacher who was my high school English teacher. At first, my English skills were quite poor, but she motivated me and provided extra help, which enabled me to make significant progress over three years.

Sugerencia: 回答表达基本清楚，但句子结构稍显混乱，建议调整语序使表达更自然，同时可以增加一些感受或原因，使内容更丰富。

Ejemplo: Not really. I lost touch with my primary school teacher a long time ago after I graduated, and I feel sorry that we can't keep in contact anymore.

Sugerencia: 回答中出现了否定词'No'，与问题不符，且句子结构不够准确，动词形式错误。建议直接回答问题，注意语法正确，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: My high school English teacher helped me by giving extra support after school and motivating me to practice regularly, which greatly improved my English skills.

Sugerencia: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且使用更准确的时态和表达。

Ejemplo: Actually, I don't want to be a teacher in the future because I like my current job as a designer. Although teaching was my dream job before, I realized after graduating that it is not the right choice for me.

× At the beginning.

✓ At the beginning,

句子“At the beginning.”是一个不完整的句子，缺少谓语动词，应该与前后句子连接，形成完整句子。建议将其改为“At the beginning,”，作为时间状语引导后续内容。

× My English is not very good.

✓ My English was not very good.

这里描述的是过去的情况，应该使用过去时态。将“is”改为“was”符合时间背景。

× make a big progress

✓ make big progress

“progress”是不可数名词，前面不应加不定冠词“a”，应直接使用“make big progress”。

× It is useful to help me improving my English skills.

✓ It is useful to help me improve my English skills.

动词“help”后面接动词原形或不定式，不能用动名词形式“improving”。应改为“help me improve”。

× I have lost touch with my primary school teacher a long time since I graduated from there, so it's really a pity that we can't contact anymore.

✓ I lost touch with my primary school teacher a long time ago since I graduated from there, so it's really a pity that we can't contact each other anymore.

“have lost”与“a long time since”搭配不当，应该用一般过去时“lost”。“a long time since”应改为“a long time ago”。“can't contact”后应加“each other”表示双方联系。

× she helped me by giving extra support after school and motivate me to practice more and regularly.

✓ she helped me by giving extra support after school and motivating me to practice more regularly.

“helped me by giving”和“motivating”应保持形式一致，且“motivate”应改为动名词“motivating”。“more and regularly”搭配不当，应改为“more regularly”。

× It is useful to help me improving my English skills.

✓ It is useful to help me improve my English skills.

同上，动词“help”后应接动词原形“improve”，而非动名词“improving”。

× after the graduates the university, I don't think teacher is a good choice for me.

✓ after I graduated from the university, I don't think teaching is a good choice for me.

“graduates the university”错误，应为“graduated from the university”。“teacher”作为职业名词应改为动名词“teaching”表示从事教学工作。