Teacher— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Жауабыңызда қайталанатын сөздер бар және сөйлемдер сәл күрделі құрылымда. Сұраққа нақты жауап беріп, қосымша ақпаратты логикалық байланыстырып, қайталанудан аулақ болыңыз.

Ejemplo: Yes, my favourite teacher is my math teacher because she explains complex topics in simple language, which helps me understand better.

Sugerencia: Жауабыңыз жақсы, бірақ "lost a touch" деген тіркес дұрыс емес. Оның орнына "lost touch" деп айту керек. Сондай-ақ, сөйлемдерді қысқа әрі нақты етіп құрастырыңыз.

Ejemplo: No, I lost touch with my primary school teacher after graduation, but I want to contact her to know how she is doing now.

Sugerencia: Жауабыңызда грамматикалық қателер бар және кейбір сөздер қайталанады. Сөйлемдерді дұрыс құрылымдап, нақты және қысқа етіп айтыңыз.

Ejemplo: My favourite math teacher explained difficult topics clearly, which helped me become confident in math and understand lessons without assistance.

Sugerencia: Жауабыңызда қайталанулар және грамматикалық қателер бар. Сөйлемдерді нақты және табиғи етіп құрастырыңыз, қайталанудан аулақ болыңыз.

Ejemplo: Yes, I want to be an English teacher in the future because I enjoy the subject and it makes me happy every day.

× I really like her because she can she can explain every single sophisticated topic and very easy language.

✓ I really like her because she can explain every single sophisticated topic in very easy language.

The sentence contains a repeated phrase 'she can she can' which is a redundancy and disrupts the sentence structure. Removing the duplicate 'she can' corrects the sentence. Also, 'and very easy language' is incomplete and should be connected properly with a preposition 'in' to form 'in very easy language'.

× No, unfortunately we lost a touch when I have graduated from my primary school, but I would like to get in touch with her again and I would like to know how she's doing and what's new in her life.

✓ No, unfortunately we lost touch when I graduated from my primary school, but I would like to get in touch with her again and I would like to know how she's doing and what's new in her life.

The phrase 'lost a touch' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'lost touch' without the article 'a'. Also, 'when I have graduated' is incorrect tense usage; it should be simple past 'when I graduated' to match the past event. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and naturalness.

× My favorite maths teacher helped me to understand complex topics in maths in really easy way.

✓ My favorite maths teacher helped me to understand complex topics in maths in a really easy way.

The phrase 'in really easy way' is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'really easy way'. In English, singular countable nouns like 'way' require an article. Adding 'a' corrects the phrase.

× So that's it was really helpful and thanks to it I am good at maths math now and I can understand every single topic without any help.

✓ So that was really helpful and thanks to it I am good at math now and I can understand every single topic without any help.

The phrase 'that's it was' is incorrect; it should be 'that was' to maintain proper tense and structure. Also, 'maths math' is redundant; in American English 'math' is used, while 'maths' is British English. Consistency is important; here 'math' is preferred. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I really want to be a teacher in the future, particularly English teacher, because that's the subjects that I'm good at, which makes me happy every day.

✓ Yes, I really want to be a teacher in the future, particularly an English teacher, because that's the subject that I'm good at, which makes me happy every day.

The phrase 'particularly English teacher' is missing the indefinite article 'an' before 'English teacher'. Also, 'that's the subjects' is incorrect because 'subjects' is plural but 'that's' refers to singular; it should be 'that's the subject' to agree in number. These corrections ensure proper article usage and subject-verb agreement.