Teamwork— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar (e.g. "compromising" and "undertaking" misused). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid repetition and keep to 2–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I usually prefer working independently because I find it easier to focus and make decisions quickly. However, I will join a team for complex tasks when different skills are needed; for example, I worked with others on a research project where each person handled a specific part.

Sugerencia: Good direct answer with a clear example. To improve, use a linking word to connect sentences and add a brief reflection on what that role taught you. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and avoid minor redundancy.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often collaborate with classmates. For example, yesterday I worked with a classmate on an experiment: I took the measurements while she recorded the results, which taught me the importance of accuracy and clear communication.

Sugerencia: Content is relevant and specific, but improve coherence by using linking words and combining related points to avoid short choppy sentences. Provide one brief concrete example or result to show impact.

Ejemplo: Working in a team has taught me that collaboration speeds up complex tasks because everyone contributes their strengths; for instance, in a recent group project we finished ahead of schedule by dividing tasks clearly. It also increased my awareness of teammates' feelings, so I now check in regularly to offer support.

Sugerencia: Correct word choice and grammar ("scarify" → "sacrifice"). Start with a concise topic sentence, then give one clear, specific example and a brief comment on how you try to handle it. Avoid repeating similar points.

Ejemplo: I dislike having to sacrifice my ideas when decisions are made without discussion because that feels unfair. For example, in a previous project one person's plan was followed without debate, which wasted time; now I try to propose a quick pros-and-cons summary to encourage a fair discussion.

× 'I generally prefer working independently because teamwork often requires compromising undertaking other people's feelings into account, which I sometimes find difficult.'

✓ 'I generally prefer working independently because teamwork often requires compromising and taking other people's feelings into account, which I sometimes find difficult.'

'compromising undertaking other people's feelings into account' is ungrammatical because two verbs are incorrectly joined; the correct verbs are 'compromising' and 'taking ... into account'. Use parallel gerunds joined by 'and' for clarity and correct structure.'

× 'Just yesterday, I worked together with a classmate to perform an experiment that required careful teamwork.'

✓ 'Just yesterday, I worked together with a classmate to perform an experiment that required careful teamwork.'

'worked together with' is acceptable, but 'worked with' is more concise. No correction needed for grammar; sentence is included to show there is no gerund error.'

× 'It has also made me more aware of other people's feelings and the need to support coworkers.'

✓ 'It has also made me more aware of other people's feelings and of the need to support coworkers.'

'aware of X and Y' requires repeating or extending the preposition 'of' when the second noun phrase is a different concept; adding 'of' improves parallel structure and clarity.'

× 'And it taught me to clarify roles and responsibilities.'

✓ 'And it has taught me to clarify roles and responsibilities.'

'And it taught me' mixes present perfect context established earlier ('Working in a team has shown me'); using present perfect 'has taught' maintains consistent tense for experiences that affect the present.'

× 'One thing I dislike about teamwork is when I have to scarify my own ideas for the group's success, which feels unfair.'

✓ 'One thing I dislike about teamwork is when I have to sacrifice my own ideas for the group's success, which feels unfair.'

'scarify' is a wrong word; the correct verb is 'sacrifice'. This is a word choice/verb form error in past/present contexts; replacing with 'sacrifice' restores correct meaning.'

× 'For example, if a team member insists on a different approach and everyone follows it, time is wasted and the project becomes inefficient, especially when the team is not organized.'

✓ 'For example, if a team member insists on a different approach and everyone follows it, time is wasted and the project becomes inefficient, especially when the team is not well organized.'

Phrase 'not organized' is acceptable but 'not well organized' is more natural and idiomatic in this context; this fixes adverb/adjective usage to match the intended meaning.'

× 'I was responsible for taking measurements while she recorded the results.'

✓ 'I was responsible for taking measurements while she was recording the results.'

To show simultaneous past actions, use past continuous for one action overlapping another; using 'recorded' (simple past) can imply sequence rather than overlap. Past continuous clarifies both tasks occurred during the same experiment.'