Mirrors— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có cấu trúc cơ bản, nhưng cần chú ý sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi nhỏ như 'every day morning' nên là 'every morning'. Ngoài ra, bạn nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'myself'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do like looking at myself in the mirror every morning. It has become part of my daily routine because I want to make sure that I look neat and presentable before leaving the house.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'I always interested' nên là 'I am always interested', 'I don't bite' có thể là lỗi đánh máy hoặc dùng từ sai. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để tăng tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have bought mirrors before. When I go shopping, I am always interested in mirrors, especially those with beautiful frames. I don't buy them just to look at myself, but also to add to my collection.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý rõ ràng nhưng cần chú ý cách dùng giới từ và cấu trúc câu, ví dụ 'in everywhere' nên là 'everywhere'. Bạn cũng nên dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

Ejemplo: Not really. I usually don't carry a mirror with me because I can find mirrors everywhere, such as in supermarkets and shopping malls. So, I just have a quick look there instead of bringing my own mirror.

Sugerencia: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'more bigger' là lỗi thừa từ, chỉ cần 'bigger'. Ngoài ra, bạn nên dùng từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm phong phú nội dung.

Ejemplo: Personally, I think mirrors are useful decorative items, especially those with beautiful frames. They can make a room look bigger than it actually is. Therefore, I always use mirrors to decorate my room.

× I want to make sure that myself is neat and presentable so I always have a quick check before heading out.

✓ I want to make sure that I am neat and presentable so I always have a quick check before heading out.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is incorrectly used as the subject of the clause. Reflexive pronouns should refer back to the subject and are not used as subjects themselves. The correct subject pronoun 'I' should be used here.

× Yes I have, when I'm shopping I always interested in the mirror, especially the ones with beautiful frame.

✓ Yes I have, when I'm shopping I am always interested in mirrors, especially the ones with beautiful frames.

The sentence lacks the verb 'am' before 'always interested' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'mirror' should be plural 'mirrors' to match the general statement, and 'frame' should be plural 'frames' to agree with 'ones'.

× I mean I don't bite just for looking myself out the mirror.

✓ I mean I don't buy just to look at myself in the mirror.

The verb 'bite' is incorrect; it should be 'buy'. The phrase 'looking myself out the mirror' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'look at myself in the mirror'. The preposition 'at' is necessary after 'look' when referring to observing oneself.

× Not really, what I mean is I see mirrors in everywhere like supermarket, shopping mall.

✓ Not really, what I mean is I see mirrors everywhere like supermarkets and shopping malls.

The phrase 'in everywhere' is incorrect; 'everywhere' does not require a preposition. Also, 'supermarket' and 'shopping mall' should be plural to match the general context.

× There are some shops that have mirrors so I always have a quick check instead of bringing my own.

✓ There are some shops that have mirrors, so I always have a quick look instead of bringing my own.

The phrase 'have a quick check' is awkward; 'have a quick look' is more natural when referring to checking one's appearance in a mirror.

× Personally, mirrors are useful decorative items with a beautiful frame.

✓ Personally, mirrors are useful decorative items with beautiful frames.

The adjective 'beautiful' should modify the plural noun 'frames' to agree in number with 'mirrors'.

× People can use it to make the space more bigger than it is.

✓ People can use it to make the space bigger than it is.

The phrase 'more bigger' is incorrect because 'bigger' is already a comparative form. Using 'more' with a comparative adjective is redundant.