Mirrors— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like 'steering myself' and 'see checking out'. Use clear linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, start with a direct answer, then explain with specific reasons.

Ejemplo: I don't often look at myself in the mirror nowadays. When I was younger, I used to check my features to see what I liked or disliked about my appearance. However, now I mainly use the mirror to make sure I look presentable before going out.

Sugerencia: Your answer needs to be clearer and more specific. Avoid vague or incorrect phrases like 'times of some races, breakouts'. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide relevant reasons for buying mirrors.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have bought mirrors several times because they are essential at home for checking our appearance before going out. For instance, I use mirrors to check for any skin problems or to fix my hair.

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using better linking words. Also, correct grammar mistakes like 'carry mirror' should be 'carry a mirror'.

Ejemplo: I don't usually carry a mirror in my purse. However, I often use my phone's camera as a mirror to check my face and appearance when I'm out.

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more structured and avoid repetition like 'I I'. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about your plans.

Ejemplo: I might use mirrors to decorate my room in the future. I have seen beautiful mirror mosaics on Pinterest, and I admire their design. I look forward to creating a space in my house where I can use mirror pieces as decoration.

× When I was younger I would like steering myself in the mirror and see checking out my features or what I like in me and what I don't like in me.

✓ When I was younger I would like staring at myself in the mirror and checking out my features or what I like about myself and what I don't like about myself.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form of the verb, so 'steering' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'staring'. Also, 'see checking out' is incorrect; it should be 'checking out'. Additionally, 'in me' is not the correct preposition; 'about myself' is appropriate when referring to features one likes or dislikes.

× When I was younger I would like steering myself in the mirror and see checking out my features or what I like in me and what I don't like in me.

✓ When I was younger I would like staring at myself in the mirror and checking out my features or what I like about myself and what I don't like about myself.

The pronoun 'myself' is correctly used reflexively here, but the phrase 'in me' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'about' when referring to personal features or qualities.

× Yes, I have bought mirrors several times over the years and I believe it is one of a needed necessity in the house to make sure that we always look presentable when we go out.

✓ Yes, I have bought mirrors several times over the years and I believe it is a necessary item in the house to make sure that we always look presentable when we go out.

The phrase 'one of a needed necessity' is incorrect because 'necessity' is a singular noun and 'one of' requires a plural noun. Also, 'needed necessity' is redundant. The correct phrase is 'a necessary item' or 'a necessity'.

× And also it is something that we need to check ourselves out in times of some races, breakouts and in places where you can see it.

✓ Also, it is something that we need to use to check ourselves during times of rashes, breakouts, and in places where we can see ourselves.

The phrase 'check ourselves out' is informal and may be misinterpreted; 'use to check ourselves' is clearer. 'Races' is incorrect; the correct word is 'rashes'. Also, 'you can see it' is vague; 'we can see ourselves' is more appropriate.

× I don't carry mirror with me in my purse, but if using your phone to check out oneself if that counts, yes I do that.

✓ I don't carry a mirror with me in my purse, but if using your phone to check oneself counts, then yes, I do that.

The noun 'mirror' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a'. Also, 'check out oneself' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'check oneself'.

× I don't carry mirror with me in my purse, but if using your phone to check out oneself if that counts, yes I do that.

✓ I don't carry a mirror with me in my purse, but if using your phone to check oneself counts, then yes, I do that.

The pronoun 'oneself' is used incorrectly here; it should be 'oneself' without 'out' after 'check'. Also, mixing 'your' and 'I' in the same sentence is inconsistent; it is better to keep the pronouns consistent.

× I use my phone camera as a mirror when I'm in places and I need to check myself out, my face and my features.

✓ I use my phone camera as a mirror when I'm in places and I need to check myself, my face, and my features.

The phrase 'check myself out' is informal and can imply vanity; 'check myself' is more appropriate in this context.

× I think I may in the future as I'll check out sources in the Pinterest where they have used mirrors as mosaics and they're amazing and I I really do admire it and also I do look forward to having a space in my house where I could use mirror pieces to use it for decorations.

✓ I think I may do so in the future as I'll check out sources on Pinterest where they have used mirrors as mosaics and they're amazing. I really do admire them and also look forward to having a space in my house where I could use mirror pieces for decoration.

The phrase 'check out sources in the Pinterest' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on Pinterest'. Also, 'use mirror pieces to use it for decorations' is redundant; 'use mirror pieces for decoration' is clearer. The sentence was also run-on and needed to be split for clarity.