Mirrors— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to make your answer sound more natural and confident. Also, correct small errors such as 'every everyday morning' to 'every morning'. Use a clear topic sentence and add a linking phrase to support your answer.

Ejemplo: I don't particularly enjoy looking at myself in the mirror, but I do check my outfit and hair every morning to make sure I look presentable.

Sugerencia: Make your sentences clearer and more grammatically correct. Instead of 'Since one years ago', say 'About a year ago'. Also, explain what you mean by 'it is very in' by using more precise vocabulary. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I bought a mirror about a year ago. It is very stylish and durable, so I use it every day.

Sugerencia: Avoid informal phrases like 'to be honest' unless necessary. Correct spelling errors such as 'unconvenient' to 'inconvenient'. Use linking words to connect your reasons clearly.

Ejemplo: I usually don't take a mirror with me because it is too big to fit in my bag, and it would be inconvenient. Besides, I can always check my appearance in the restroom if needed.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and correct unclear words such as 'Amira' which seems to be a mispronunciation of 'a mirror'. Also, complete your sentences and use linking words to explain your reasons clearly.

Ejemplo: Absolutely yes, because a mirror can make my room look stylish and add a sense of space to it.

× maybe every everyday morning I will check my outfit and make sure my hair is done.

✓ maybe every morning I check my outfit and make sure my hair is done.

The phrase 'every everyday morning' is redundant and incorrect; 'every morning' is sufficient. Also, 'I will check' suggests future tense, but the context implies a habitual action, so the simple present tense 'I check' is appropriate.

× Since one years ago and it is very in.

✓ Since one year ago and it is very popular.

'One years ago' is incorrect because 'year' should be singular after 'one'. Also, 'very in' is informal and unclear; 'very popular' is a better choice to express the idea.

× I use it every day.

✓ I use it every day.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× because the mirror is too big to put inside my bag.

✓ because the mirror is too big to put in my bag.

The correct preposition to use with 'put' and 'bag' is 'in', not 'inside'. 'Put in my bag' is the standard expression.

× I think it is unconvenient and if I want to check my appearance I can go to the toilet.

✓ I think it is inconvenient, and if I want to check my appearance, I can go to the restroom.

The word 'unconvenient' is a misspelling; the correct word is 'inconvenient'. Also, 'toilet' is less polite in this context; 'restroom' is more appropriate. Commas are added for clarity.

× Absolutely yes, because I think, uh, Amira can make my room stylish and. Add add line to the space.

✓ Absolutely yes, because I think a mirror can make my room stylish and add a nice line to the space.

'Amira' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'a mirror'. The sentence was fragmented; it is corrected to a complete sentence. 'Add add line' is corrected to 'add a nice line' for clarity and correctness.