Mirrors— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence stating your habit and frequency, then give one or two specific reasons. Use correct verb forms and simpler phrasing (e.g. “check for any changes” instead of “shake off myself”). Keep it within 2–4 sentences and avoid redundant phrases like “before meeting persons.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I usually check myself in the mirror once or twice a day to look for any changes in my skin or hair. I do this because I like to feel presentable before I meet people.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer then explain briefly and specifically why. Use correct sentence structure and smooth linking words (e.g. “because” or “so”). Avoid awkward phrases like “To be mirrors at my room.”

Ejemplo: No, I’ve never bought a mirror because I already have a large mirror in my room, so buying another one seems unnecessary.

Sugerencia: Answer directly then give a clear reason. Use natural expressions such as “carry a mirror” and correct tense/forms (e.g. “I don’t usually carry a mirror because…”). Avoid absolute words like “perfect”; say “look fine” or “ready.” Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: No, I don’t usually carry a mirror because I check my outfit and appearance at home before I leave. If I need to, I use a small compact mirror in my bag.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct statement, then give two clear reasons using linking words (“because” / “also”). Use natural phrasing: “full-length mirror,” “check my outfit,” and “show the room’s reflection.” If mentioning taking photos, say “take photos” or “send pictures to friends.” Keep it concise.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would. I have a large full-length mirror in my bedroom because it helps me check my outfit, and it also reflects the room beautifully when I take photos to send to friends.

× Yes, I enjoy looking at myself in the mirror because I usually shake off myself that are there any changes on my face because I want to keep my face and skin neat before meeting persons.

✓ Yes, I enjoy looking at myself in the mirror because I usually check myself to see if there are any changes on my face; I want to keep my face and skin neat before meeting people.

Errors: incorrect reflexive pronoun use ('shake off myself' is wrong) and awkward phrasing ('that are there any changes'). Use 'check myself' to mean examine your appearance. Replace 'shake off' with 'check', use 'to see if there are any changes' for clarity, and use 'people' instead of 'persons'. Maintain present habitual tense. Suggestion: use common collocations like 'check myself' and 'people' and connect clauses with 'to' or a semicolon for readability.

× No, I have never bought a mirror before because I already have. To be mirrors at my room, so I don't think it is necessary to buy more.

✓ No, I have never bought a mirror before because I already have one in my room, so I don't think it is necessary to buy more.

Errors: incorrect use of 'to be mirrors at my room' and article omission. Use 'there is/are' structure or simply 'I already have one in my room'. Include the article 'one' to refer to a single mirror and connect clauses with 'so'. Suggestion: use 'I already have one in my room' or 'there is a mirror in my room' for correct existence and article usage.

× I don't take a mirror with myself because I think it is unnecessary and I already check up my outfit and my face that already perfect before going out so I don't take a mirror.

✓ I don't take a mirror with me because I think it is unnecessary, and I already check my outfit and my face, which are already perfect, before going out, so I don't carry a mirror.

Errors: incorrect reflexive pronoun 'with myself' should be 'with me'; awkward verbs 'check up' and wrong clause 'that already perfect'. Use 'check' not 'check up' for appearance, use relative clause 'which are already perfect' and maintain subject-verb agreement ('are'). Also replace repeated 'take a mirror' with 'carry a mirror' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: use 'with me', 'check my outfit', and correct relative clauses.

× Yes I would because I have a big one at the center of the bedroom and I use it to take my full body like outfit and the mirror also shows the surroundings inside my bedroom and I send it to my friends.

✓ Yes, I would because I have a big one in the center of the bedroom, and I use it to see my full outfit; the mirror also shows the surroundings of my bedroom and I send photos to my friends.

Errors: incorrect verb usage 'take my full body like outfit' is ungrammatical. Use 'see my full outfit' or 'check my full body outfit'. Also 'at the center' should be 'in the center' and 'surroundings inside my bedroom' is redundant—use 'surroundings of my bedroom'. 'I send it to my friends' is vague; specify 'photos' if that is meant. Suggestions: use correct verbs ('see', 'check'), correct preposition 'in', and be specific ('send photos').