Mirrors— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence stating your habit, then add one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and keep it within 2–4 sentences. Also correct verb forms and word choice (e.g., ‘self-obsessed’ → ‘a bit vain’ or ‘I like looking at myself’; ‘ample of times’ → ‘many times’).

Ejemplo: I do like looking at myself in the mirror and I check my appearance several times a day. For example, I often look to make sure my hair and clothes are neat, and it makes me feel more confident.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence, then give specific details about what you bought and why. Use correct plural/singular forms and prepositions (e.g., ‘I bought several mirrors recently’). Avoid filler words (‘uh’) and redundant phrases. Use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘so’ to connect reasons.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have bought several mirrors recently. For instance, my husband and I bought a five-foot standing mirror at a shopping mall because it fits my bedroom and makes the room look larger.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and correct grammar: use present simple consistently and correct word order. Give one or two specific situations and connect them with linking words (e.g., ‘usually’, ‘for example’, ‘so’). Replace awkward phrases (‘set my hairs’) with natural expressions (‘fix my hair’).

Ejemplo: Yes, I usually carry a small mirror in my bag. For example, when I arrive at a restaurant or a shop, I often check my hair and makeup and make small adjustments if necessary.

Sugerencia: Give a concise topic sentence and one or two specific reasons or examples. Use correct vocabulary: ‘decorate’ instead of ‘decoding’, and say ‘make the room look more spacious’ or ‘enhance the décor’. Use linking words such as ‘because’ or ‘so’ to explain purpose.

Ejemplo: Yes, I use mirrors to decorate my home because they make rooms look larger and brighter. For instance, I placed a large mirror in the living room to reflect light and create the illusion of more space.

× I am a self obsessed person so I looking myself in mirror ample of times in a day because I feel very relaxed and happy when I see myself in the mirror.

✓ I am a self-obsessed person so I look at myself in the mirror ample times a day because I feel very relaxed and happy when I see myself.

Pronoun and verb forms: 'looking myself' is incorrect. Use the verb phrase 'look at myself' (verb + preposition + object). Also 'I looking' is missing the correct form 'I look' (present tense). Hyphenate 'self-obsessed'. Replace 'ample of times in a day' with 'ample times a day' for natural phrasing.

× I also noticed what changes are coming in me and.

✓ I also notice the changes that are happening to me.

Sentence is ungrammatical and incomplete. 'Noticed' implies past but context is general, so present 'notice' fits. Use 'the changes that are happening to me' for clear relative clause and correct preposition 'to' rather than 'in'. Remove trailing 'and'.

× Yes, I bought a lot of mirror for myself recently.

✓ Yes, I bought a lot of mirrors for myself recently.

Plural issue and article: 'mirror' should be plural 'mirrors' when referring to multiple items. The past tense 'bought' is fine with 'recently'.

× I went for each shopping with my husband in the packages mall.

✓ I went shopping with my husband at the shopping mall.

Incorrect prepositions and word choice: 'went for each shopping' is unnatural; use 'went shopping'. 'In the packages mall' is incorrect and unclear; use 'at the shopping mall'.

× Uh, I bought a 5 feet mirror for myself and it was a very expensive and a beautiful mirror, uh, which fulfill my house, my room space.

✓ I bought a 5-foot mirror for myself, and it was a very expensive and beautiful mirror that suited my room.

Use '5-foot' as adjective form, not '5 feet'. Remove extra articles: 'a very expensive and a beautiful' should be 'a very expensive and beautiful mirror'. 'Which fulfill my house, my room space' is ungrammatical; use 'that suited my room'.

× I always take a mirror with me.

✓ I always take a mirror with me.

This sentence is acceptable in present simple for habitual action; no change needed. Keep as is.

× Uh a small mirror always in my bag when I go for a shopping or any restaurant.

✓ I always keep a small mirror in my bag when I go shopping or to a restaurant.

Sentence missing verb: add 'keep'. Use 'go shopping' rather than 'go for a shopping'. Use 'to a restaurant' for correct preposition. Place adverb 'always' before main verb for natural word order.

× When I reached my destination, I firstly see myself in the mirror and set my hairs or makeup.

✓ When I reach my destination, I first look at myself in the mirror and fix my hair or makeup.

Tense consistency: use present simple 'reach' to match habitual action. 'Firstly' is better as 'first'. Use 'look at myself' (verb + preposition). 'Set my hairs' is incorrect; use 'fix my hair'. 'Fix my makeup' is preferable.

× Yes I use many mirror for decoding my room and house.

✓ Yes, I use many mirrors to decorate my room and house.

Wrong word choice: 'decoding' should be 'decorating'. 'Many mirror' needs plural 'mirrors'. Use infinitive 'to decorate' to express purpose.

× Also in every space of my house I use a mirror for fulfill it and mirrors looks more spacious and beautiful so I use.

✓ Also, in every space of my house I use a mirror to fill it, and mirrors make the space look more spacious and beautiful, so I use them.

Several issues: 'for fulfill it' is incorrect; use 'to fill it' or 'to fill the space'. Subject-verb agreement: 'mirrors looks' should be 'mirrors make' or 'mirrors look'. Pronoun 'them' needed instead of leaving sentence incomplete. Added commas and rephrased for clarity.