Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding awkward phrasing and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often remember my dreams. Sometimes I discuss their meanings and reasons with my family, which helps me understand them better.

Sugerencia: Avoid repeating phrases like "as I mentioned earlier" and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons for sharing dreams.

Ejemplo: I usually share my dreams with my family because I'm curious about their meanings. I also enjoy telling my dreams like stories to friends and hearing about theirs.

Sugerencia: Good use of examples and clear explanation. To improve, correct minor errors (e.g., 'filing' should be 'failing') and use linking words to enhance coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe dreams have special meanings because they reflect our subconscious thoughts and emotions. For instance, dreaming about failing an exam might indicate feelings of insecurity and stress.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about your dreams and efforts.

Ejemplo: I always want to make my dreams come true because I am passionate about them. Therefore, I work hard every day, and achieving my dreams feels like a rewarding sign of personal growth.

× Sometimes it's good or bad to know the meaning of and reason behind that I discussed with my family.

✓ Sometimes it's good or bad to know the meaning and reason behind that, which I discussed with my family.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'of and' together, which is not grammatically correct. The conjunction 'and' should connect 'meaning' and 'reason' directly without 'of' before it. Also, adding 'which' clarifies the relative clause referring to the discussion with family.

× As I mentioned earlier, I shared my dream with my family because I had curiosity to know the meaning and reasons behind that.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I share my dreams with my family because I have a curiosity to know the meaning and reasons behind them.

The original sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'shared' and 'had' when the context implies a habitual or current action. Changing to present tense 'share' and 'have' fits better. Also, 'curiosity' should be preceded by 'a' and 'dream' should be plural to match 'reasons' and general context.

× Also, I love to tell my dreams like stories to others and want to know.

✓ Also, I love to tell my dreams like stories to others and want to know theirs.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'want to know' without specifying what is wanted. Adding 'theirs' clarifies that the speaker wants to know others' dreams, making the sentence complete and grammatically correct.

× For example, dreaming about filing might indicate feeling of insecurity and stress in life.

✓ For example, dreaming about failing might indicate feelings of insecurity and stress in life.

The word 'filing' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'failing'. Also, 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match the plural nouns 'insecurity and stress'. This correction improves meaning and grammatical agreement.

× I always want to fulfill my dream, which I passionate about because I work hard every day for them.

✓ I always want to fulfill my dreams, which I am passionate about because I work hard every day for them.

The sentence has pronoun inconsistency: 'dream' is singular but 'them' is plural. Changing 'dream' to plural 'dreams' aligns with 'them'. Also, 'which I passionate about' is missing the verb 'am' to be grammatically correct.

× It's a sign of personal growth and it's like rewarding to fulfill our dream.

✓ It's a sign of personal growth and it's like a reward to fulfill our dreams.

The phrase 'like rewarding' is incorrect; 'rewarding' is an adjective, but here a noun 'reward' is needed. Also, 'dream' should be plural 'dreams' to be consistent with previous corrections.