Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words like 'umm', and provide specific details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes remember my dreams, especially when they are about important events like my baseball team's performance in February. For example, I dreamt about our team's grade, which made me feel excited.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations. Focus on giving a direct answer first, then add specific reasons or examples. Avoid repeating words and ensure your sentences are complete and logical.

Ejemplo: I usually don't share my dreams because I often forget them. However, I am interested in other people's dreams, especially when I was younger, I used to listen to my friends' dream stories.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat relevant but lacks clarity and specific supporting details. Try to explain your opinion clearly and provide examples or reasons to support it, using linking words for coherence.

Ejemplo: I think dreams can have special meanings depending on the person. For instance, some psychologists say that dreams reflect our memories and feelings, but they are not always accurate.

Sugerencia: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Provide a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating words, and give specific examples to explain your opinion. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Whether I want to make my dreams come true depends on their content. For example, I would like to achieve positive dreams, but I wouldn't want to realise nightmares like being chased by scary animals.

× I sometimes remember my dreams umm but I don't know why I remember that.

✓ I sometimes remember my dreams, umm, but I don't know why I remember them.

The pronoun 'that' is incorrectly used to refer to 'dreams', which is plural. The correct pronoun is 'them' to match the plural noun 'dreams'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12).

× But that dream is expect dream umm I expect my February baseball teams umm grade in my dream that is.

✓ But that dream is an expected dream, umm, I expect my February baseball team's grade in my dream, that is.

The phrase 'expect dream' is incorrect; 'expected dream' is the correct adjective form. Also, 'teams umm grade' should be 'team's grade' to show possession. The preposition 'in' is correctly used here. The main issue is incorrect use of adjectives (ID 13) and article errors (ID 22).

× I don't share my dreams with others because to be honest I don't remember the weather so I I I mind some I mind that say my same my dream but I I'm interested in other streams such as When I was young I heard many dreams with my.

✓ I don't share my dreams with others because, to be honest, I don't remember the weather, so I sometimes mind or recall my same dream, but I'm interested in other dreams. For example, when I was young, I heard many dreams from others.

The sentence contains multiple pronoun errors such as 'mind some I mind that say my same my dream' which is unclear and incorrect. 'Streams' should be 'dreams'. Also, the sentence structure is confusing. Correct pronouns and clearer sentence structure are needed. This is incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12) and sentence structure errors (ID 26).

× To be honest, it depends on the situation. Because I saw documents that is explained dreams, dreams based on her or his memory, memories.

✓ To be honest, it depends on the situation because I saw documents that explain dreams, dreams based on his or her memories.

The phrase 'documents that is explained dreams' is incorrect; it should be 'documents that explain dreams'. Also, 'her or his memory, memories' should be 'his or her memories' for correct pronoun order and plurality. This is incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12) and subject-verb agreement (ID 27).

× It depends on the dream's content because while some dreams dreams are very good for me but good for me, other dream is very bad such as chasing something and scares animals.

✓ It depends on the dream's content because while some dreams are very good for me, other dreams are very bad, such as chasing something and scary animals.

The sentence incorrectly repeats 'dreams' and uses singular 'dream' where plural 'dreams' is needed. Also, 'scares animals' should be 'scary animals' to correctly describe the noun. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1) and incorrect use of adjectives (ID 13).