Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như sự lặp lại từ không cần thiết. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I can remember my dreams quite well. Usually, I have many dreams, most of which are scary, but sometimes I also have pleasant dreams.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và chính tả (ví dụ: 'streams' thay vì 'dreams'). Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về lý do bạn chia sẻ với bố mẹ.

Ejemplo: I am not very interested in other people's dreams, but I like to share my own dreams, especially scary or happy ones, with my parents the next morning because it makes me feel closer to them.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và rõ ràng, đồng thời dùng từ nối để làm rõ ý. Hãy tránh dùng các cụm từ không chính xác như 'I drop for myself'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe dreams have special meanings. Sometimes, they warn us about the future or give us important messages.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, cũng như cấu trúc câu chưa mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời logic hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I definitely want to make my dreams come true, especially those about my future and career. However, I believe that achieving dreams depends on our hard work, not just thinking about them.

× Well, actually for myself, I'm actually a good dreamer because I dreamt a lot and all the dreams I have, well unfortunately it's they always been bad dreams and horror dreams.

✓ Well, actually for myself, I'm actually a good dreamer because I dream a lot and all the dreams I have, well unfortunately they have always been bad dreams and horror dreams.

The verb 'dreamt' is a past tense form, but the context suggests a habitual action, so the present tense 'dream' is more appropriate. Also, 'it's they always been' is incorrect; it should be 'they have always been' using the present perfect tense to indicate an ongoing situation.

× Well, actually for myself, I'm actually a good dreamer because I dreamt a lot and all the dreams I have, well unfortunately it's they always been bad dreams and horror dreams.

✓ Well, actually for myself, I'm actually a good dreamer because I dream a lot and all the dreams I have, well unfortunately they have always been bad dreams and horror dreams.

The phrase 'it's they always been' incorrectly uses 'it's' (it is) with 'they'. The correct pronoun is 'they' without 'it's' to agree with the plural noun 'dreams'.

× I'm not actually quite interested in other streams but about my dreams, especially some horror or some to to happy dreams.

✓ I'm not actually quite interested in other dreams but about my dreams, especially some horror or some happy dreams.

The word 'streams' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'dreams'. Also, 'to to happy dreams' is incorrect and should be 'some happy dreams' to correctly describe the noun.

× I would probably share immediately with my parents in the next morning because I feel enjoying just sharing.

✓ I would probably share immediately with my parents the next morning because I enjoy just sharing.

The phrase 'in the next morning' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'the next morning' without 'in'. Also, 'I feel enjoying' is incorrect; it should be 'I enjoy' to express liking an action.

× Yes, of course dreams can bring different meanings, but I drop for myself.

✓ Yes, of course dreams can bring different meanings, but I doubt for myself.

The word 'drop' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is likely 'doubt', meaning to be uncertain. This is a vocabulary error affecting meaning.

× At least myself think like that.

✓ At least I think like that.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is incorrectly used as the subject. The correct subject pronoun is 'I'.

× Well, as a normal person, I definitely want my dreams come true, especially dreams about my future or my career or just like funny like billionaire dreams.

✓ Well, as a normal person, I definitely want my dreams to come true, especially dreams about my future or my career or just funny billionaire dreams.

The verb phrase 'want my dreams come true' is incorrect; it should be 'want my dreams to come true' using the infinitive form after 'want'. Also, 'just like funny like billionaire dreams' is redundant and awkward; simplified to 'just funny billionaire dreams'.

× But however I think it's not.

✓ However, I think it's not.

Using both 'but' and 'however' together is redundant. Choose one; 'However' is appropriate here and should be followed by a comma.

× You cannot always think about the dreams.

✓ You cannot always just think about dreams.

The phrase 'think about the dreams' is awkward; removing 'the' and adding 'just' improves naturalness and clarity.