Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and use correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and fragmented phrases. Use linking words like "for example" or "also" correctly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I remember my dreams. For example, my main goals are to get a great education and to buy a new apartment. I believe these achievements will improve my future prospects.

Sugerencia: Give a direct answer first, then explain briefly with clear reasons. Reduce hesitation and correct sentence structure. Use linking words such as "but" and "however" properly, and be specific about when you share and why you like others' dreams.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do share my dreams with friends, but usually only when they ask. However, I enjoy listening to other people’s dreams because it helps me learn about their goals and get new ideas.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear opinion and a specific explanation. Avoid vague wording and filler sounds. Use linking phrases like "because" and "as a result" to explain how reflecting on dreams leads to progress, and give a concrete example.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think dreams can have special meanings because reflecting on them regularly helps you set goals. For example, if you plan your studies and review them every month, you are more likely to make steady progress.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and add a specific reason or plan. Replace fillers with clear phrases and give a short example of a step you would take to achieve a dream to show determination and practicality.

Ejemplo: Yes, I definitely want to make my dreams come true because they improve my life and career opportunities. For instance, to achieve my goal of higher education, I plan to study for entrance exams and save money for tuition.

× 'And these dreams I have now, for example, my, my the best dream is have a great education and have my new apartment.'

✓ 'And these are the dreams I have now. For example, my best dream is to have a great education and a new apartment.'

'Present tense and sentence structure: The original sentence lacks necessary auxiliary verbs and infinitive marker. Use "are" to link the subject "these" to "dreams" in present simple, and use the infinitive "to have" after "is". Also remove redundant words and add the article "a" before "new apartment".'

× 'Yes, uh, I share my dreams with, with my friends, but uh, I share my dreams when they ask, but when they didn't ask, I enjoy to not uh, ask uh, for the question and I'm very interesting the other streams it's good.'

✓ 'Yes, I share my dreams with my friends, but I share them only when they ask. When they do not ask, I prefer not to bring them up, and I am very interested in other people's dreams — it is good.'

'Multiple errors: incorrect prepositions and phrasing. Use "share with" correctly and replace "when they didn't ask" with present simple or present tense reference "when they do not ask." "Enjoy to not ask" is ungrammatical; use "prefer not to bring them up." "Interesting" should be the adjective "interested" and use the preposition "in" with "other people's dreams." Also use appropriate articles and pronouns for clarity.'

× 'Yes, because if you think about this every day, every week, every month, uh, you can get uh, your dreams, uh, you can have a lot of uh, develops in, in the future.'

✓ 'Yes, because if you think about them every day, every week, or every month, you can achieve your dreams and make a lot of progress in the future.'

'Tense and word choice: Replace "get your dreams" with "achieve your dreams" for correct collocation. "Develops" is incorrect; use the noun "progress." Use the pronoun "them" to refer to "dreams." Maintain present simple for the conditional clause and future implication.'

× 'Sure. I think all people want to make, uh, dreams, uh, come true because it's very great for us. Uh, it's a good, uh, opportunity for our future.'

✓ 'Sure. I think everyone wants to make their dreams come true because it is very important for us. It is a good opportunity for our future.'

'Word choice and agreement: Use "everyone" instead of "all people" for naturalness and match the singular with "their" as a gender-neutral possessive. Replace "very great" with "very important" for appropriate collocation. Remove filler words and use consistent contractions or full forms.'