Dreams— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, use correct grammar and clearer structure. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct tense and articles, avoid repetition, and add one specific detail about a recent dream. Use linking words if adding detail.

Ejemplo: Yes, I can remember my dreams. For example, I recently dreamed that I was studying at a top university to become more knowledgeable. In that dream I was attending difficult classes and enjoying learning English, which motivated me to study harder in real life.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, correct word choice and grammar, and give a brief reason plus a clear example. Use linking words like 'but' or 'however' to contrast.

Ejemplo: I usually don't share my dreams because they are personal, but I sometimes tell my cousin about them because she is my best friend and supports me. For instance, I once told her I want to study abroad and she helped me find scholarship information.

Sugerencia: Be clearer and avoid vague expressions. State your opinion directly, give a reason and a short example, and use correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g., 'a person without dreams lacks direction').

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe dreams have meaning because they give people goals and motivation. For example, my dream to improve my English pushed me to study regularly and take classes, which helped me make real progress.

Sugerencia: Give a direct personal answer rather than a general statement, use correct verbs and phrasing (e.g., 'plan my life'), and include one specific action you are taking to achieve your dream.

Ejemplo: Yes, I want to make my dreams come true, so I am planning my life around them. For example, to become fluent in English I study for an hour every day and take online lessons to improve my skills.

× Yes of course I have.

✓ Yes, of course I do.

The student used 'have' to answer whether they can remember dreams. The appropriate auxiliary for present simple short answers to 'Can you remember...' is 'do' (Do/Does). Use 'Yes, of course I do.' to match the question and present tense.

× I had to dream that I will be smart girl which always growing and always improving self development and I always dream it to be a girl which adores the studying which learning the English.

✓ I used to dream that I would be a smart girl who was always growing and always improving herself, and I always dreamed of being a girl who loved studying and learning English.

Multiple tense and form errors: 'had to dream' is incorrect for habitual past—use 'used to dream' or 'I used to dream'. 'Will' should be backshifted to 'would' in reported/habitual past. 'smart girl' needs an article 'a'. 'which' should be 'who' for people. 'always growing' and 'always improving self development' need past progressive or adjectives and correct reflexive pronoun 'herself'. 'dream it to be' is ungrammatical—use 'dreamed of being'. 'adores the studying' should be 'loved studying' and 'which learning the English' should be 'learning English' without 'the'.

× Essentially, I don't all always share my dreams with others 'cause I think it's one of the most previous thing in my life.

✓ Essentially, I don't always share my dreams with others because I think they are one of the most precious things in my life.

Word order and choice: 'don't all always' is incorrect—use 'don't always'. 'previous' is the wrong word; 'precious' is correct for important/valuable. 'thing' should be plural 'things' to agree with 'dreams'. Use 'because' instead of colloquial ''cause'. Pronoun agreement: 'it' should be 'they' referring to 'dreams'.

× However, sometime I really share with my dreams with my cousin 'cause this is my best friend.

✓ However, sometimes I do share my dreams with my cousin because she is my best friend.

Use 'sometimes' (plural adverb). 'share with my dreams with' is ungrammatical—correct is 'share my dreams with'. Use auxiliary 'do' for emphasis if needed. Reference 'this is my best friend' should be 'she is my best friend' for clarity and pronoun use.

× Of course I figured that person without dreams is nobody 'cause every person, uh, should have a dreams 'cause it's as a reason to grow and umm, improving self development.

✓ Of course I think that a person without dreams is nobody, because everyone should have dreams since they are a reason to grow and improve themselves.

'I figured' is odd here; 'I think' fits better. 'person without dreams is nobody' needs article 'a person'. 'every person' with 'a dreams' is wrong—use 'everyone' and plural 'dreams' without article. 'it's as a reason' is incorrect; use 'they are a reason' or 'dreams are a reason'. 'improving self development' should be 'improve themselves' for correct verb form and reflexive pronoun.

× If you don't have a dream, you just, uh, want to be.

✓ If you don't have a dream, you may just drift through life or not know what you want to be.

The original 'you just want to be' is incomplete and unclear. Provide a clearer verb phrase that fits meaning, such as 'drift through life' or 'not know what you want to be'. This fixes sentence structure and clarifies intent.

× Of course, I consider that almost every person want to make his dreams come true.

✓ Of course, I believe that almost every person wants to make their dreams come true.

Subject-verb agreement and tense: 'person want' should be 'person wants' or better 'people want'. Also use gender-neutral 'their' instead of 'his'. 'Consider' is acceptable but 'believe' is more natural.

× Uh, Therefore I think that almost every person uh should do plane their life to that the dreams come true.

✓ Therefore, I think that almost everyone should plan their life so that their dreams can come true.

Multiple errors: 'do plane their life' should be 'plan their life'. 'to that the dreams come true' should be 'so that their dreams can come true' or 'so their dreams come true'. Use 'everyone' and 'their' for natural, inclusive wording.