Emails— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "I don't quite often"; instead, say "I don't often". Also, try to limit your answer to 3-4 sentences and use linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: No, I don't often send emails because I prefer other communication methods. For instance, I usually use WhatsApp to chat with my colleagues and share media or documents, which is faster and more convenient.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and contains repetition and unclear phrases. Make sure to complete your sentences and avoid repeating words. Start with a clear topic sentence and then provide specific examples with linking words to clarify your points.

Ejemplo: I usually send emails for formal purposes, such as work-related matters or job interviews. For informal conversations, I prefer using instant messaging apps because they are quicker and more casual.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and precise. Avoid repeating words like "popular" and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as "technological advanced" should be "technologically advanced."

Ejemplo: Yes, sending emails is quite popular in China because it is a technologically advanced country. Compared to paper communication, emails are more convenient and widely used for both personal and professional purposes.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but is repetitive and contains filler words like "uh." Try to avoid repetition and filler words, and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, be concise and clear.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe sending emails will become more popular in the future because people will increasingly adopt technology. As a result, the use of paper will decrease, making emails a preferred communication method.

× No, I don't quite often send emails because I prefer other modes of communication.

✓ No, I don't often send emails because I prefer other modes of communication.

The adverb 'quite often' is incorrectly placed. In English, adverbs of frequency like 'often' usually come before the main verb but after auxiliary verbs. 'Don't often' is the correct placement here.

× I use WhatsApp to communicate to my colleagues and send media and other documents over WhatsApp rather than emails.

✓ I use WhatsApp to communicate with my colleagues and send media and other documents over WhatsApp rather than emails.

The verb 'communicate' is followed by the preposition 'with' when indicating the person you are communicating with, not 'to'.

× I usually send emails that are related to work or I send.

✓ I usually send emails that are related to work.

The sentence is incomplete and redundant. The phrase 'or I send' is unnecessary and creates a fragment. Removing it corrects the sentence structure.

× I prefer to send emails when it is about a job interview.

✓ I prefer to send emails when it is about a job interview.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no correction.

× On the other hand, for for informal conversation, I.

✓ On the other hand, for informal conversation, I prefer other methods.

The sentence is incomplete and contains a repeated word 'for'. Completing the sentence and removing the duplicate corrects the structure.

× China is a very technological advanced country and emails are very convenient in comparison to paper.

✓ China is a very technologically advanced country and emails are very convenient in comparison to paper.

The adjective 'technological' should be the adverb 'technologically' to correctly modify the adjective 'advanced'.

× So emails are very popularly used in China.

✓ So emails are very popularly used in China.

The adverb 'popularly' is awkward here. The phrase 'very popular' or 'widely used' is more natural. However, since only errors from the provided list should be corrected, this is acceptable.

× Yes, I do believe that sending emails will be more frequent in the future because in the future people will, uh, start to use technology and adapt to it more and, uh, use of paper will be less in the future.

✓ Yes, I do believe that sending emails will be more frequent in the future because people will start to use technology and adapt to it more, and the use of paper will be less in the future.

The sentence has unnecessary fillers and awkward phrasing. Removing fillers and adding 'the' before 'use of paper' improves clarity and correctness.