Emails— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, which affect naturalness and effectiveness. Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and avoid redundancy. Also, correct word choice and sentence structure will improve clarity. For example, clarify your student status and use correct verb tenses.

Ejemplo: When I was a student in Hungary, I often sent emails to my professors and the administration because I was an exchange student and needed to stay in contact with them. However, nowadays I don't send emails as often.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'. Also, be specific about who 'other UH' refers to and use consistent verb tenses.

Ejemplo: I send emails to my university colleagues when I need to share information or request documents like university statements that are necessary for my daily tasks.

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally relevant but could be more concise and natural. Use linking words to improve flow and avoid repeating 'someone'. Also, use more precise vocabulary and sentence structure.

Ejemplo: Yes, sending emails is popular in China because most people use technology for communication. Moreover, emails are preferred when people want to be polite or communicate more formally and specifically.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but is affected by filler words and awkward phrasing. Try to avoid fillers and use clearer, more natural sentences. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I think email usage will remain the same in the future because it is a formal and professional way to communicate, and such communication will always be necessary.

× I often sent e-mail to my professors and my administrations because I was exchanged children students there

✓ I often sent emails to my professors and my administration because I was an exchange student there

The phrase 'e-mail' should be pluralized to 'emails' to match the context of multiple messages. 'Administrations' is incorrect here; 'administration' is the correct singular noun referring to the administrative body. 'Exchanged children students' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'exchange student' to describe a student studying abroad temporarily.

× But nowadays I didn't do Zenigama emails that much.

✓ But nowadays I don't send emails that much.

The phrase 'didn't do Zenigama emails' is incorrect. The verb 'do' is not appropriate here; 'send' is the correct verb for emails. Also, 'didn't' is past tense, but 'nowadays' indicates present time, so present tense 'don't send' should be used.

× I'm sending emails to other UH, when I had to share them some information and also when I need for them to send me some umm, university statements or other things.

✓ I send emails to others when I have to share some information and also when I need them to send me university statements or other things.

The sentence mixes present continuous 'I'm sending' with past tense 'had to' and incorrect preposition 'to other UH'. The correct form is simple present 'I send' to describe habitual actions. 'Other UH' is unclear; 'others' is appropriate. 'Need for them to send me' should be 'need them to send me' without 'for'.

× I'm sending emails to other UH, when I had to share them some information and also when I need for them to send me some umm, university statements or other things.

✓ I send emails to others when I have to share some information and also when I need them to send me university statements or other things.

The preposition 'to' after 'need' is incorrect in this context. The correct structure is 'need someone to do something' without 'for'. Also, 'to other UH' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'to others' is appropriate.

× ...they have communication in online and if someone wants to be more polite...

✓ ...they have communication online and if someone wants to be more polite...

The preposition 'in' before 'online' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'communication online' without 'in'.

× ...if someone tries to have more specific communication with other of course they will use e-mail.

✓ ...if someone tries to have more specific communication with others, of course they will use e-mail.

The pronoun 'other' is incorrect here; the plural form 'others' should be used to refer to other people.

× Maybe it will be same as it is now, uh, for my personal view, uh, the sending emails, it's a more formal way and, uh, professional and formal communication is always will be necessary in our future.

✓ Maybe it will be the same as it is now. In my personal view, sending emails is a more formal way, and professional and formal communication will always be necessary in our future.

The phrase 'will be same' is missing the article 'the'. 'The sending emails, it's' is awkward; 'sending emails is' is correct. 'Is always will be necessary' is redundant; 'will always be necessary' is correct.