Emails— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议加强语法基础，避免重复和口语填充词，回答应更简洁且结构清晰。

Ejemplo: I don't often send emails because in China, we usually use WeChat or Ding Ding to communicate. I mainly use emails to contact my tutors at the University of Manchester.

Sugerencia: 回答中有语法错误且表达不够清晰，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复和口语填充词，内容应具体且连贯。

Ejemplo: I usually send emails to my tutors at the University of Manchester for formal or academic matters, such as requesting a recommendation letter.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不流畅，建议加强句子结构练习，使用连接词使表达更连贯，避免重复和口语填充词。

Ejemplo: Emails are not very popular in China; they are usually used only on formal occasions. In daily life, WeChat is the dominant communication method.

Sugerencia: 回答缺乏逻辑和清晰度，建议理清思路，使用连贯的句子表达观点，避免重复和语法错误，内容应具体且有条理。

Ejemplo: I think emails will become more popular in the future because they are important for workplace communication. However, with new technologies, it's hard to predict if their popularity will be maintained.

× I'm not send emails on a frequent basis because this is we in China with WeChat or Ding Ding to connect with each other.

✓ I don't send emails on a frequent basis because we in China use WeChat or Ding Ding to connect with each other.

这里的动词形式错误，'I'm not send' 应该用一般现在时的否定形式 'I don't send'，因为描述的是习惯性动作。

× this is we in China with WeChat or Ding Ding to connect with each other.

✓ we in China use WeChat or Ding Ding to connect with each other.

句中 'this is we' 用法不当，应直接使用主语 'we'，去掉多余的 'this is'。

× I only contact use emails with my tutors, uh, in the University of Manchester.

✓ I only contact my tutors at the University of Manchester using emails.

'contact use emails' 结构混乱，应改为 'contact my tutors ... using emails'，使句子通顺。

× I usually send emails to my tutor at University of Manchester for the formal or academic matches.

✓ I usually send emails to my tutor at the University of Manchester for formal or academic matters.

'at University of Manchester' 应加定冠词 'the'，'matches' 应为 'matters'，表示事务。

× I usually send emails to my tutor at University of Manchester for the formal or academic matches.

✓ I usually send emails to my tutor at the University of Manchester for formal or academic matters.

大学名称前应加定冠词 'the'，且 'matches' 是拼写错误，应为 'matters'。

× Not really, emails is the second choice uh, in China, umm only in some very formal occasions, umm in their day in the in our daily life, umm the WeChat is more popular and the dominance dominant communication way.

✓ Not really, emails are the second choice in China, only in some very formal occasions. In our daily life, WeChat is a more popular and dominant way of communication.

'emails is' 应为复数 'emails are'，'dominance dominant' 用词重复，应选 'dominant'。

× Not really, emails is the second choice uh, in China, umm only in some very formal occasions, umm in their day in the in our daily life, umm the WeChat is more popular and the dominance dominant communication way.

✓ Not really, emails are the second choice in China, only in some very formal occasions. In our daily life, WeChat is a more popular and dominant way of communication.

'in their day in the in our daily life' 结构混乱，应简化为 'in our daily life'。

× Well, in my future, I think it is more, it will be more popular because I need to get access to the workplace, but to the whole society.

✓ Well, in the future, I think it will be more popular because I need to get access to the workplace and the whole society.

'in my future' 应为 'in the future'，句子中时态应统一为将来时，且连接词应为 'and'。

× I I am not really sure whether it's whether it's maintenance, its popularity or not because you know, everything will have every the society has.

✓ I am not really sure whether it will maintain its popularity or not because, you know, everything in society changes.

句子结构混乱，重复 'whether it's'，'maintenance' 用词错误，应为 'maintain'，最后部分表达不清，应简化为 'everything in society changes'。