Emails— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子结构较为简单。建议注意时态和单复数的正确使用，避免语法错误，同时使表达更自然流畅。

Ejemplo: No, I don't send emails very often because I find it troublesome to think about the subject line and the proper format. Instead, I prefer texting or chatting with my friends on social media since it's more convenient.

Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，明确表达发送邮件的具体时间和原因，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ejemplo: Sometimes, I send emails to my teachers when they haven't contacted me about assignments or tests. I usually write detailed questions to clarify my doubts.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议注意主谓一致，避免重复表达，并用更准确的词汇描述现象。

Ejemplo: Honestly, no. Nowadays, social media is the most popular way to communicate in China. Many people prefer chatting on social platforms rather than sending emails.

Sugerencia: 回答中时态和语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议使用正确的时态，简洁表达观点，并用具体例子支持观点。

Ejemplo: I think sending emails will become less popular in the future because most people now use social media apps like Instagram or WeChat to communicate.

× No, I don't send e-mail very often.

✓ No, I don't send emails very often.

“e-mail”在这里指的是复数形式的电子邮件，应该用复数“emails”。

× It's very trouble for me because I need to think how to write the title and the format is quite difficult for me.

✓ It's very troublesome for me because I need to think about how to write the title and the format is quite difficult for me.

“trouble”是名词，形容词形式应为“troublesome”。另外，“think how to write”应改为“think about how to write”，加介词“about”。

× I need to think how to write the title and the format is quite difficult for me.

✓ I need to think about how to write the title and the format is quite difficult for me.

动词“think”后面需要加介词“about”来引导宾语从句。

× I prefer sending texts or chat with my friends in social media because it's quite convenient.

✓ I prefer sending texts or chatting with my friends on social media because it's quite convenient.

“prefer”后面接动名词形式，且“chat”应改为“chatting”，介词应为“on social media”。

× Sometime I would like to send the e-mail to my teachers who haven't either contacted me for available where I have some questions on assignment and tests.

✓ Sometimes I would like to send emails to my teachers who haven't contacted me yet because I have some questions about assignments and tests.

“Sometime”应为副词复数形式“Sometimes”；“the e-mail”应为复数“emails”；“teachers”复数形式正确；“haven't either contacted me for available”表达不正确，改为“haven't contacted me yet”；“assignment”应为复数“assignments”；“questions on”应为“questions about”。

× I would like to write a long sentence to ask her about the questions.

✓ I would like to write a long message to ask her about the questions.

“write a long sentence”表达不自然，通常说“write a long message”或“write at length”。

× There are a lot of people use the social media to chat with others instead of sending emails.

✓ There are a lot of people who use social media to chat with others instead of sending emails.

“people”后应加关系代词“who”；“the social media”应去掉定冠词“the”，直接用“social media”。

× As you can see that we have a tray of sending emails now.

✓ As you can see, we have a trend of sending emails now.

“tray”应为“trend”，且句中“that”多余，应去掉。

× Sending e-mail will be became less popular because I think most of the people now always use the social media to instead of using e-mail.

✓ Sending emails will become less popular because I think most people now always use social media instead of using emails.

“will be became”时态错误，应为“will become”；“most of the people”改为“most people”；“the social media”去掉“the”；“to instead of”结构错误，去掉“to”。

× For example like Instagram or WeChat, they always use them to text with other.

✓ For example, like Instagram or WeChat, they always use them to text with others.

“other”应为复数“others”，表示其他人。