Talents— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat natural but a bit redundant and unclear. Try to be more concise and correct grammar, for example, use 'the drums' instead of 'just drum' and avoid filler words like 'yeah' at the end. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting detail.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am quite good at playing the drums. I feel confident when I keep a steady beat, and I enjoy performing with others.

Sugerencia: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and is a bit confusing. Use past tense consistently and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your reason and when you started.

Ejemplo: I started playing the drums when I was in grade 6 because I wasn't very good at piano. I found drums more interesting, so I decided to learn them from that time.

Sugerencia: Your answer has grammar errors and unclear phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and linking words to express your opinion clearly. Also, avoid redundancy and be more specific about your future plans.

Ejemplo: Although I am confident in playing the drums, I still have a long way to go before becoming a professional. Therefore, I don't plan to make it my career but rather keep it as a hobby.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammar mistakes. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Use correct verb tenses and linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, be specific about your brother's talent and your collaboration.

Ejemplo: No, I am the only one in my family who plays the drums. However, my brother plays the guitar, and sometimes we play songs together.

× Yeah, I don't want to exaggerate myself, but I feel I am pretty good at playing just drum and I feel very confident when I was playing with a beat and yeah.

✓ Yeah, I don't want to exaggerate myself, but I feel I am pretty good at playing just drums and I feel very confident when I play with a beat and yeah.

The phrase 'when I was playing' should be in the present tense 'when I play' to match the present context of feeling confident. Also, 'drum' should be plural 'drums' because it refers to the instrument generally, which is countable and usually plural in this context.

× Oh I played just drums since I was in grade 6 because at that time I felt I'm not really good at playing piano, but instead I find I found I'm playing drums is so cool and I just want to learn it.

✓ Oh I have played just drums since I was in grade 6 because at that time I felt I wasn't really good at playing piano, but instead I found playing drums was so cool and I just wanted to learn it.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'Played' should be present perfect 'have played' to indicate an action continuing from past to present. 'I'm not really good' should be past tense 'I wasn't really good' to match 'at that time'. 'I find I found' is redundant; 'I found' is correct. 'I'm playing drums is so cool' is incorrect; it should be 'playing drums was so cool' to maintain past tense. 'I just want' should be 'I just wanted' to keep past tense consistent.

× So I started to play it since then.

✓ So I have been playing it since then.

The phrase 'started to play it since then' is incorrect because 'since then' requires present perfect or present perfect continuous tense to indicate an action continuing from the past to present. 'I have been playing it since then' correctly expresses this.

× While I'm pretty confident with me playing drums, I still have a really long progress to be a professional drummers and I won't seem it as my occupation choice and I would rather just see it as my interest.

✓ While I'm pretty confident with my playing drums, I still have a really long way to go to be a professional drummer and I don't see it as my occupation choice and I would rather just see it as my interest.

'A really long progress' is incorrect; 'progress' is uncountable and should be 'a really long way to go'. 'Professional drummers' should be singular 'professional drummer' to match 'a'. 'I won't seem it' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't see it' to express current opinion. 'With me playing drums' should be 'with my playing drums' to use the correct possessive form.

× Uh no, I am the only one who plays during my family but my brother also play instruments.

✓ Uh no, I am the only one who plays in my family but my brother also plays instruments.

'During my family' is incorrect preposition; it should be 'in my family'. 'My brother also play' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; it should be 'my brother also plays' because 'brother' is singular.

× Umm he played guitar and sometimes we would we sometimes we work together to like playing the same song.

✓ Umm he plays guitar and sometimes we work together to play the same song.

The sentence has redundant and incorrect phrases 'we would we sometimes we work'. It should be simplified to 'sometimes we work together'. Also, 'played' should be 'plays' to indicate habitual action. 'To like playing' is incorrect; it should be 'to play' to express purpose.