Talents— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to reduce filler words like 'uh' and 'um' to make your speech more fluent and natural. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details, and avoid redundancy. For example, start by stating your talent clearly, then explain how you discovered it and how it makes you feel, using linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am good at presentation skills. I discovered this talent during college when I gave a presentation on environmental degradation. I expressed my views clearly, which made me feel very proud and confident.

Sugerencia: Focus on using correct verb tenses and sentence structures to improve clarity. Avoid repeating phrases and use linking words like 'before' and 'because' to connect ideas logically. Also, try to be more concise and avoid unnecessary words.

Ejemplo: I realized my presentation skills during college. Before that, I was unaware of this talent. I felt overjoyed because I had the chance to express my thoughts clearly in front of others, which increased my enthusiasm.

Sugerencia: Work on sentence clarity and grammar, especially subject-verb agreement and article usage. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect your ideas clearly. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and be specific about how your talent will help your future career.

Ejemplo: Definitely, my presentation skills will be very useful in my future career because I want to become a successful businesswoman. Businesspeople often need to present their ideas clearly, so being familiar with these skills will help me communicate effectively.

Sugerencia: Improve pronoun usage and sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words like 'because' and 'even' to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid vague phrases and be more specific about your father's talent and experiences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I believe my father has the same talent. He often told me that as a child, he enjoyed expressing his thoughts and exchanging opinions with friends. He even won first prize in a debate competition, which he enjoyed very much.

× I have a good in my presentation skill.

✓ I am good at my presentation skills.

The phrase 'have a good in' is incorrect. The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at'. Also, 'presentation skill' should be pluralized to 'presentation skills' to sound natural.

× I came to know when I was studying in my college at that time, it was my, uh, presentation on involvement degradation.

✓ I came to know this when I was studying in college; at that time, it was my presentation on involvement degradation.

The sentence is awkward and lacks proper punctuation. 'Came to know' is correct past tense, but the sentence needs to be split for clarity. Also, 'in my college' is better as 'in college'.

× There I have expressed my view clearly at a time I was on 7th heaven because I don't believe on myself.

✓ There I expressed my views clearly; at that time, I was on cloud nine because I believed in myself.

'Have expressed' is present perfect, but the event is in the past, so simple past 'expressed' is better. 'On 7th heaven' is incorrect; the idiom is 'on cloud nine'. Also, 'don't believe on myself' should be 'believed in myself'.

× I come to know about my talent that is related to a presentation skill.

✓ I came to know about my talent related to presentation skills.

The verb 'come' should be in past tense 'came' to match the past context. Also, 'a presentation skill' should be plural 'presentation skills'.

× And at the time, I was really felt delighted like over the moon because to it, I got an opportunity to express my thoughts, feelings in front of others very clearly, which really enhance my enthusiasm.

✓ At that time, I really felt delighted, like I was over the moon because I got an opportunity to express my thoughts and feelings clearly in front of others, which really enhanced my enthusiasm.

'Was really felt' is incorrect; 'felt' is sufficient. 'Like over the moon' should be 'like I was over the moon'. 'Because to it' is incorrect; it should be 'because I got'. 'Enhance' should be past tense 'enhanced' to match the past context.

× And definitely as my talents really helpful in my future as I want to become a successful businesswoman.

✓ And definitely, my talents will be really helpful in my future as I want to become a successful businesswoman.

The sentence lacks a verb; 'are' or 'will be' is needed after 'talents'. Also, 'as my talents really helpful' is incorrect; it should be 'my talents will be really helpful'.

× There such a skilled player, very prominent role.

✓ They play a very prominent role.

The original sentence is incomplete and incorrect. 'There such a skilled player' is incorrect; it should be 'They play' referring to talents or skills. Also, 'player' is not appropriate here; 'role' is better.

× Because each time the the person business person have to express their thoughts, their ideas in front of others while giving the presentation.

✓ Because each time a business person has to express their thoughts and ideas in front of others while giving a presentation.

'The the person business person' is incorrect; it should be 'a business person'. Also, subject-verb agreement: 'person have' should be 'person has'.

× So in case if I already well familiar with such skills, I don't face any.

✓ So in case I am already well familiar with such skills, I won't face any problems.

'If I already well familiar' is incorrect; it should be 'if I am already well familiar'. Also, 'I don't face any' is incomplete; it should be 'I won't face any problems' to match future context.

× Yeah, yes, I believe that my father has the same talent because whenever I spend a time with him, each time he told me that when he was a child, he always expressed their thoughts with your friends, exchange their opinions.

✓ Yes, I believe that my father has the same talent because whenever I spend time with him, he tells me that when he was a child, he always expressed his thoughts with his friends and exchanged their opinions.

'Spend a time' should be 'spend time'. 'He told me' should be 'he tells me' for present habitual action. 'Their thoughts with your friends' is incorrect; it should be 'his thoughts with his friends'.

× Even he also participated in a debate competition where he won a first prize and such type of activity he enjoyed the most.

✓ He also participated in a debate competition where he won first prize, and he enjoyed that type of activity the most.

'Even he also' is redundant; 'He also' is sufficient. 'A first prize' should be 'first prize'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.