Talents— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer wa eigo no shizen-sa ga tarinai desu. Tatoeba, 'uh' ya 'father father' no you na fukusu no kotoba wa yokeru beki desu. Mata, 'one of the challenge' wa 'one of the challenges' ni shite, bunshou no seikaku-sa o takameru hitsuyou ga arimasu. Motto shourai ni tsunagaru you na meirei bun de kotaeru koto mo taisetsu desu.

Ejemplo: Yes, I am very good at math. It has been a strong skill of mine since childhood because my father, who is a math teacher, helped me a lot when I was young.

Sugerencia: Kotae no bunpou to imi ga fumei na tokoro ga arimasu. Tatoeba, 'I believe is my very father was a math teacher' wa seikaku ni tsutaeru you ni shite kudasai. Mata, 'habit habit' no you na kurikaeshi ya 'messy skill' wa yokeru beki desu. Rikai shi yasui you ni, shourai ni tsunagaru meirei bun to rensetsu mo tsukatte kudasai.

Ejemplo: I started learning math seriously when I was 10 years old. My father, who is a math teacher, built a strong foundation for me, which helped me develop good study habits to improve my math skills.

Sugerencia: Kotae ga fumei de, bunpou mo machigatte imasu. 'Simon’s engineer' wa rikai dekinai kotoba desu. Mata, 'I'm I'm and beneficial' wa imi ga tsutawari nikui desu. Motto meirei de, rikai shi yasui kotoba o tsukatte, rensetsu mo tsukete kudasai.

Ejemplo: I want to be a civil engineer, so math is very important for my future work. I often need to calculate material quantities and other measurements, so my math skills will definitely help me perform well.

Sugerencia: Kotae no imi ga fumei de, bunpou mo machigatte imasu. 'My father is mad at us' wa imi ga wakarimasen. 'Not as like as me' ya 'I'm the rear ahead' mo seikaku ni tsutaeru you ni shite kudasai. Motto shizen de, rikai shi yasui kotoba o tsukatte kudasai.

Ejemplo: Yes, my father is very good at math because he is a math teacher. Also, my older brother is good at math, but I think I am better than him.

× This is one of the challenge I have since my childhood.

✓ This is one of the challenges I have had since my childhood.

The word 'challenge' should be plural 'challenges' because it follows 'one of the', which requires a plural noun. Also, 'have' should be 'have had' to indicate the experience started in the past and continues.

× my mother, my father father is a math teacher who used to help me a lot during my childhood.

✓ my mother, my father is a math teacher who used to help me a lot during my childhood.

The repetition 'father father' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'father'.

× Was it mastered recently or when you were young?

✓ Did you master it recently or when you were young?

The question should use 'Did you master' to correctly form the past tense question rather than 'Was it mastered', which is passive and awkward here.

× When mastering math was a continuous process for me, but I started very early when I was 10.

✓ Mastering math was a continuous process for me, but I started very early when I was 10.

The sentence incorrectly starts with 'When' but does not complete the clause properly. Removing 'When' corrects the sentence structure.

× I believe is my very father was a math teacher.

✓ I believe it is because my very father was a math teacher.

The sentence is missing the subject 'it' after 'believe' and 'very' is misplaced; 'very father' is incorrect, it should be 'my father'.

× He led a strong foundation on my on me who which helped me to develop the habit habit to enhance my messy skill.

✓ He laid a strong foundation for me which helped me develop the habit to enhance my math skills.

'Led' should be 'laid' for foundation. 'on my on me who which' is incorrect and should be 'for me which'. 'habit habit' is repeated and should be singular. 'messy skill' is a mishearing or typo for 'math skills'.

× Obviously, it's Simon's engineer.

✓ Obviously, I'm a simulation engineer.

'Simon’s engineer' is a mishearing or typo; likely intended 'simulation engineer'. Also, 'it's' should be 'I'm' to refer to self.

× When I have to do some calculation about the quantity of the material use or other different aspect of life, math is always used.

✓ When I have to do some calculations about the quantity of material used or other different aspects of life, math is always used.

'Calculation' should be plural 'calculations' to match 'some'. 'Material use' should be 'material used'. 'Aspect' should be plural 'aspects'.

× I'm I'm and beneficial and it will help me to live up quality.

✓ It's beneficial and it will help me to live a quality life.

The sentence has repeated 'I'm I'm and beneficial' which is incorrect. It should be 'It's beneficial'. 'live up quality' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'live a quality life'.

× Yes, I said I'd love to that My father is mad at us so he's obviously good at math.

✓ Yes, I would love to say that my father is mad at us, so he's obviously good at math.

The sentence is confusing and contains errors. 'mad at us' is likely a mishearing of 'mad at math' or 'good at math'. Corrected to 'I would love to say that my father is good at math'. Also, capitalization errors fixed.

× Additionally, my brother, my Big Brother is also very good at math, but not as like as me.

✓ Additionally, my brother, my big brother, is also very good at math, but not as good as me.

'Big Brother' should be lowercase unless a proper noun. 'not as like as me' is incorrect; correct form is 'not as good as me'.

× I'm the rear ahead.

✓ I'm ahead of the rest.

'rear ahead' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'ahead of others' or 'ahead of the rest'.

× I am one of the most intelligent among others.

✓ I am one of the most intelligent among them.

'Among others' is less precise; 'among them' is more appropriate when referring to a specific group.