Talents— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy such as "I don't really have a specific talent to be noted" and use smoother phrasing. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas and provide a more structured response.

Ejemplo: I don't have a particular talent, but I am good at remembering places. For instance, if I visit a place once, I can recall it vividly for a long time.

Sugerencia: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. The phrase "things that are quite focused" is unclear. Try to provide a clearer explanation with linking words and avoid vague expressions. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

Ejemplo: I think I developed this ability around the age of 13 or 14. Whenever I visit a new place, I pay close attention to details, which helps me remember it better.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains filler words like "Umm" and "uh" which reduce fluency. Try to avoid these and use more precise vocabulary. Also, improve sentence structure for clarity and coherence by using linking words.

Ejemplo: I believe this talent will be useful in my future career, especially if I work in fields related to maps or navigation, because I can easily remember places after visiting them once.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and provides a good example, but the phrase "just opposite of me" is informal and could be replaced with a more natural expression. Also, try to use linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I don't think anyone in my family shares this talent. For example, my mother has a poor memory for places; she once visited my house but forgot its location and details the next day.

× I don't really have a specific talent to be noted, but if I have to answer this question then I would say I am quite good at remembering places.

✓ I don't really have a specific talent to note, but if I have to answer this question then I would say I am quite good at remembering places.

The phrase 'a specific talent to be noted' is awkward and incorrect here. The correct expression is 'a specific talent to note' meaning a talent worth mentioning. The passive form 'to be noted' is unnecessary and incorrect in this context.

× Like if I go to one place just once, I can remember this place forever.

✓ Like if I go to a place just once, I can remember that place forever.

The phrase 'one place' is less natural than 'a place' when referring to an unspecified location. Also, 'this place' should be 'that place' to refer back to the place mentioned earlier. Using 'a' and 'that' improves clarity and naturalness.

× I don't really remember about my childhood, but I would say when I was about 13 to 14, I was quite good at it.

✓ I don't really remember my childhood, but I would say when I was about 13 or 14, I was quite good at it.

The verb 'remember' does not require the preposition 'about' when referring to memories. Also, '13 to 14' should be '13 or 14' to indicate an approximate age. Removing 'about' and changing 'to' to 'or' corrects the sentence.

× And whenever I go to a place, I try to focus on things that are quite focused and that's it.

✓ And whenever I go to a place, I try to focus on things that are quite noticeable and that's it.

The phrase 'things that are quite focused' is incorrect because 'focused' describes a person or mind concentrating, not things. The correct adjective is 'noticeable' or 'distinctive' to describe things that attract attention.

× if I want to set my future now with something that is related to maps or something like that, it would be useful for me because I can remember the places, uh, that I visit just once.

✓ if I want to set my future now with something related to maps or something like that, it would be useful for me because I can remember the places, uh, that I visit just once.

The phrase 'something that is related to maps' can be simplified to 'something related to maps' by omitting 'that is'. This is more natural and grammatically correct.

× She can't remember any places and also anything that she experienced just once.

✓ She can't remember any places and also anything that she has experienced just once.

The verb tense should be present perfect 'has experienced' to indicate an action that happened at an unspecified time in the past relevant to the present. Using simple past 'experienced' is less appropriate here.

× For example when one day she came to my house and the next day she forgot my house, even the house number and the colour of the house.

✓ For example, one day she came to my house and the next day she forgot my house, even the house number and the colour of the house.

The phrase 'when one day' is redundant; 'one day' alone is sufficient. Adding a comma after 'For example' improves sentence clarity. The rest of the sentence is correct in past tense.