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Part 1

Examinador

Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?

Candidato

When I was a child, I was impressed about the advertisement of McDonald's. I wanted to buy happy set because it's looks like enjoyable.

Examinador

Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?

Candidato

Yes, in Japan a wide range of advertisements, uh, exist in public transportation, such as trains and taxis, which makes me feel interesting.

Examinador

Do you like advertisements?

Candidato

To be honest, I dislike watching advertisements. When I watch uh TV program or movies, I'm unwilling to watch a lot of ad advertisements.

Examinador

What kind of advertising do you like?

Candidato

One of my favorite advertisements is video in trains. When I have free time and I don't have what I want, I enjoy watching advertisement in trains.

Examinador

Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?

Candidato

Yes, I really watch a lot of advertisements every day, especially when I see Instagram accounts. But I dislike it because advertisement interrupt my favorite.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 6.0Fluidez y coherencia: 6.0Pronunciación: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso léxico: 6.0

Part 1

Is there an advertisement that made an impression on you when you were a child?

Puntuación: 65.0

Sugerencia: 回答は直接的ですが、文法の誤り("impressed about"は不自然)や語彙の選択("happy set"は"Happy Meal"が正しい)に注意が必要です。また、詳細をもう少し具体的に述べると良いでしょう。

Ejemplo: When I was a child, I was impressed by a McDonald's advertisement. It showed the Happy Meal as fun and exciting, which made me want to buy it.

Do you see a lot of advertising on trains or other transport?

Puntuación: 60.0

Sugerencia: 文法の誤り("makes me feel interesting"は不自然)や言葉の選び方に注意してください。"uh"の使用は避け、より自然な表現を心がけましょう。具体的な例を加えると良いです。

Ejemplo: Yes, in Japan, there are many advertisements on public transportation like trains and taxis, which I find quite interesting because they often promote local events.

Do you like advertisements?

Puntuación: 55.0

Sugerencia: "unwilling to watch a lot of ad advertisements"は不自然な表現です。"uh"は避け、より自然で簡潔な表現を使いましょう。理由や感情を具体的に述べると良いです。

Ejemplo: To be honest, I dislike advertisements because they interrupt my favorite TV programs and movies, which can be quite annoying.

What kind of advertising do you like?

Puntuación: 60.0

Sugerencia: 文法の誤り("advertisement"は複数形が適切)や表現の明確さに注意してください。理由や具体的な内容を加えると、より良い回答になります。

Ejemplo: One of my favorite types of advertising is video ads on trains because they are short and entertaining, which helps me pass the time during my commute.

Do you often see advertisements when you are on your phone or computer?

Puntuación: 60.0

Sugerencia: 文法の誤り("advertisement interrupt"は"advertisements interrupt"が正しい)や語彙の選択に注意してください。理由を具体的に述べ、より自然な表現を使いましょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, I see many advertisements daily, especially on Instagram, but I dislike them because they interrupt my favorite content.

Gramática

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I was impressed about the advertisement of McDonald's.

I was impressed by the advertisement of McDonald's.

The correct preposition to use with 'impressed' is 'by', not 'about'. 'Impressed by' indicates the cause of the impression.

Singular and plural issue

× I wanted to buy happy set because it's looks like enjoyable.

I wanted to buy a Happy Set because it looks enjoyable.

'Happy Set' is a singular noun and needs an article 'a'. Also, 'it's looks' is incorrect; 'it looks' is correct because 'it' is the subject and 'looks' is the verb.

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, in Japan a wide range of advertisements, uh, exist in public transportation, such as trains and taxis, which makes me feel interesting.

Yes, in Japan, a wide range of advertisements exist in public transportation, such as trains and taxis, which I find interesting.

The phrase 'makes me feel interesting' is incorrect because 'interesting' describes things, not feelings. The correct expression is 'I find interesting'. Also, commas are added for clarity.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× When I watch uh TV program or movies, I'm unwilling to watch a lot of ad advertisements.

When I watch TV programs or movies, I'm unwilling to watch a lot of advertisements.

The phrase 'watch uh TV program or movies' should be plural 'TV programs or movies' to match the context. Also, 'ad advertisements' is redundant; 'advertisements' is sufficient.

Singular and plural issue

× One of my favorite advertisements is video in trains.

One of my favorite advertisements is videos in trains.

The word 'video' should be plural 'videos' because it refers to multiple advertisements shown in trains.

Sentence structure errors

× When I have free time and I don't have what I want, I enjoy watching advertisement in trains.

When I have free time and don't have anything to do, I enjoy watching advertisements in trains.

The phrase 'I don't have what I want' is unclear; 'don't have anything to do' is more natural. Also, 'advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements'.

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I really watch a lot of advertisements every day, especially when I see Instagram accounts.

Yes, I really see a lot of advertisements every day, especially when I use Instagram.

The verb 'watch' is not typically used with 'advertisements' in this context; 'see' is more appropriate. Also, 'when I see Instagram accounts' is better expressed as 'when I use Instagram'.

Sentence structure errors

× But I dislike it because advertisement interrupt my favorite.

But I dislike it because advertisements interrupt my favorites.

'Advertisement' should be plural 'advertisements' to match 'interrupt'. Also, 'my favorite' is unclear; 'my favorites' (things I like) is more appropriate.

Vocabulario

FreeWithout charge; Unencumbered by; Vacant; Independent; On the loose
HappyCheerful; Glad; Fortunate
InterestingAbsorbing
WideBroad; Fully open; Comprehensive; Agape; Undecided
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