Swimming— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to form clear, concise sentences directly answering the question, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I really enjoy swimming. When I was a child, my mother enrolled me in swimming lessons, which helped me become confident and relaxed in the water. Swimming has also improved my physical fitness and daily skills.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Provide a direct response with supporting details using correct grammar and linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: I don't think learning to swim is difficult, especially if you have good teachers. For example, my mother enrolled me in a high-quality course where the instructors provided useful guidance, which made learning easier.

Sugerencia: Your answer needs clearer sentence structure and more precise vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons or examples.

Ejemplo: In my country, people like to swim in various places, especially swimming pools and beaches. Young people often prefer swimming pools because they find it relaxing and refreshing after a long day at school.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Provide a clear comparison using linking words and specific details to explain differences between swimming in the pool and the sea.

Ejemplo: In my opinion, swimming in the sea is different from swimming in a pool because the sea is much larger and can be less safe due to waves and currents. On the other hand, pools are smaller and generally safer, especially for young swimmers.

× When I was a child my mother enrolled for me to study a course of swimming.

✓ When I was a child, my mother enrolled me in a swimming course.

The verb 'enrolled' is correctly in the past tense, but the preposition 'for' is incorrect here. The correct phrase is 'enrolled me in' a course. Also, 'a course of swimming' is unnatural; 'a swimming course' is better.

× Then I feel very convenient and relaxed and swimming it helps me a lot in skill in my daily life.

✓ Then I felt very comfortable and relaxed, and swimming helps me a lot with skills in my daily life.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'Feel' should be past tense 'felt' to match 'Then'. 'Convenient' is incorrect to describe a feeling; 'comfortable' is appropriate. 'Swimming it helps me' is ungrammatical; it should be 'swimming helps me'. Also, 'in skill' should be 'with skills'.

× 'Cause I think it's not difficult to learn how to swim because my mother enrol me to a high quality course, then almost teacher in here is guidance children is very useful is have more.

✓ Because I think it's not difficult to learn how to swim since my mother enrolled me in a high-quality course, and almost every teacher here guides children very usefully and has a lot more to offer.

'Enrol' should be past tense 'enrolled' to match the past action. 'Enrol me to' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'enrolled me in'. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; 'almost teacher in here is guidance children is very useful is have more' is ungrammatical and needs restructuring to 'almost every teacher here guides children very usefully and has a lot more to offer'.

× Well in my country is have a lot a lot of place to swimming, especially swimming pool and beach.

✓ Well, in my country, there are a lot of places to swim, especially swimming pools and beaches.

The phrase 'is have' is incorrect; the correct structure is 'there are' for plural 'places'. 'Place to swimming' should be 'places to swim'. Also, 'swimming pool and beach' should be pluralized to 'swimming pools and beaches'.

× I think young people always go to swimming pool to practice swim because it's have them more relax and refresh after a longer school or.

✓ I think young people always go to swimming pools to practice swimming because it helps them relax and refresh after a long day at school.

'Go to swimming pool' should be plural 'swimming pools'. 'Practice swim' should be 'practice swimming'. 'It's have them more relax and refresh' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'it helps them relax and refresh'. 'After a longer school or' is incomplete; 'after a long day at school' is appropriate.

× On my opinion, I think the difference between swimming in the pool and swimming in the sea is swimming in the sea is very large and its own safety for almost everyone, but swimming in the pool is smaller is a very safe for almost young people and I think it's very useful.

✓ In my opinion, the difference between swimming in the pool and swimming in the sea is that the sea is very vast and less safe for most people, but the pool is smaller and very safe for most young people, and I think it's very useful.

The phrase 'On my opinion' should be 'In my opinion'. 'Swimming in the sea is very large' is incorrect; 'the sea is very vast' is better. 'Its own safety for almost everyone' is unclear; 'less safe for most people' is clearer. 'Swimming in the pool is smaller is a very safe' is ungrammatical; it should be 'the pool is smaller and very safe'. The sentence is long and needs clearer structure.