Watch— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答は簡潔で自然ですが、もう少し詳細を加えて、なぜスマートウォッチを好むのか説明すると良いでしょう。例えば、スマートウォッチの便利な機能について触れると効果的です。

Ejemplo: Yes, I always wear a smart watch because it helps me keep track of my fitness and notifications conveniently throughout the day.

Sugerencia: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、文法的に自然な表現に改善し、感情をもう少し具体的に表現すると良いでしょう。

Ejemplo: I received a smart watch as a birthday gift when I was a first-year high school student, and it felt very special and made me really happy.

Sugerencia: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。文を正しく構成し、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

Ejemplo: I think some people wear expensive watches because they want to show that they are wealthy and successful.

Sugerencia: 回答は意味が通じますが、繰り返しがあり、文を簡潔にまとめるとより効果的です。また、理由をもう少し詳しく説明すると良いでしょう。

Ejemplo: I don't think wearing a watch is important nowadays because most people use smartphones to check the time, which is more convenient.

× I got a smart watch as a birthday gift when I was a first year high school student. It's so special and felt so good.

✓ I got a smart watch as a birthday gift when I was a first year high school student. It was so special and felt so good.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. 'It's' (it is) should be 'It was' to maintain past tense consistency since the event happened in the past.

× I think that people who were expensive was this one to be seen rich person.

✓ I think that people who wear expensive watches want to be seen as rich people.

The original sentence is grammatically incorrect and unclear. 'Were expensive' is incorrect for describing people; 'wear expensive watches' is appropriate. Also, 'was this one to be seen rich person' is ungrammatical and should be rephrased to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I don't think it is important to wear a watch because nowadays more and more people use smartphone and they can they can confirm times with smartphones.

✓ I don't think it is important to wear a watch because nowadays more and more people use smartphones and they can confirm the time with smartphones.

'Smartphone' should be plural 'smartphones' to match 'more and more people use'. Also, 'confirm times' is better as 'confirm the time' for natural English. The repeated phrase 'they can they can' is a redundancy and should be corrected.