Websites— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you visit these websites with specific reasons.

Ejemplo: I often visit political and news websites because I study political science. Also, my job requires me to stay informed about current events around the world, so I regularly check these sites to keep updated.

Sugerencia: Improve your answer by using correct grammar and clearer vocabulary. Avoid incomplete sentences and explain why you like the website with specific details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: My favorite website is Alarm Weekly because it provides a wide range of news, including political and economic updates. I enjoy it since I can find various topics that interest me all in one place.

Sugerencia: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence flow. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about the changes you mention.

Ejemplo: No, the websites I usually visit have not changed much. However, if there are any changes, they are mostly related to the design or layout, which are minor and do not affect the content.

Sugerencia: Make your answer more fluent and complete by avoiding sentence fragments. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons for popularity.

Ejemplo: As I mentioned, political and football websites are the most popular in my country. This is because football is the most popular sport worldwide, especially in Egypt, where many people are passionate about it.

× Actually, I often visit the political websites or news websites because my measures political science so.

✓ Actually, I often visit political websites or news websites because my major is political science.

The phrase 'my measures political science so' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'my major is political science'. Also, 'the political websites' should be 'political websites' without 'the' because it refers to websites in general, not specific ones.

× My e-mail job is to keep.

✓ My main job is to keep informed.

The phrase 'My e-mail job is to keep' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'My main job is to keep informed' or 'My job is to keep updated' to make sense.

× Knowing what is going on on the world so I keep watching these websites.

✓ Knowing what is going on in the world, so I keep watching these websites.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'in' when referring to 'the world'. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate the clauses.

× My favorite website is Alarm Weekly becaused it provides me with a lot of news that I'm looking forward to and it has a lot of.

✓ My favorite website is Alarm Weekly because it provides me with a lot of news that I'm looking forward to, and it has a lot of content.

The word 'becaused' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. The sentence is incomplete after 'a lot of', so 'content' is added to complete the thought. Also, a comma is added before 'and' to separate the clauses.

× List this political list or econonmic anything you want you will find it.

✓ It has lists of political or economic topics; anything you want, you will find it.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. It is corrected to clarify that the website has lists of political or economic topics.

× No, I don't think so, because, uh, the websites that I often visit still the same.

✓ No, I don't think so, because, uh, the websites that I often visit are still the same.

The verb 'are' is missing before 'still the same'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× And if there are any change it would be in the.

✓ And if there are any changes, it would be in the design of the site.

The word 'change' should be plural 'changes' to agree with 'any'. Also, the sentence is incomplete; 'design of the site' is added to complete the thought.

× but not a major or significant change.

✓ but not a major or significant change.

This sentence fragment is acceptable as a continuation of the previous sentence; no correction needed here.

× As I mentioned the most popular websites.

✓ As I mentioned, the most popular websites.

A comma is needed after 'As I mentioned' to separate the introductory phrase.

× In my country is political websites or football websites becauses in Egypt most people like football because.

✓ In my country, the most popular websites are political websites or football websites because in Egypt most people like football.

The verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject 'websites'. Also, 'becauses' is incorrect; it should be 'because'.

× It is the most popular sport in the world and specially in Egypt.

✓ It is the most popular sport in the world, especially in Egypt.

The word 'specially' is incorrect; the correct word is 'especially'. Also, a comma is added before 'especially'.