Websites— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「sports napkin which is a very famous apps」では、単数・複数の一致や冠詞の使い方に注意が必要です。また、「a lot of information」などの表現をより自然に言い換えることが望ましいです。さらに、接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより流暢になります。

Ejemplo: I often visit Sports Napkin, a very popular app in Japan. It provides a lot of information about baseball, football, basketball, and other sports. This app is very convenient because it helps me keep up with the latest sports news in society.

Sugerencia: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な接続が目立ちます。例えば、「and that's mainly because and there are a lot of information」という部分は意味が不明瞭で、接続詞の使い方を改善する必要があります。また、情報を具体的に述べる際に、より明確な理由や感情を表現すると良いでしょう。

Ejemplo: My favorite website is the official homepage of the professional rugby league in Japan because it offers detailed information about the sport and its athletes. I enjoy spending two or three hours scrolling through the site, which makes me very happy.

Sugerencia: 文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。例えば、「in last year」では前置詞の使い方が誤っていますし、「sports Navy apps」や「how to get a much more comfortable to stay」などの表現は不自然です。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけ、接続詞を使って文をつなげると良いでしょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, last year the Sports Napkin app had a major update that focused on improving user comfort. This change has made the app much easier and more enjoyable for me to use.

Sugerencia: 回答は内容が不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。例えば、「the still the the city of our country is not so white」という表現は意味が通じません。質問に対して直接的に答え、具体的な例や理由を明確に述べることが必要です。簡潔で論理的な構成を心がけましょう。

Ejemplo: In my country, websites that provide information about restaurants are very popular. Since the cities are still developing, these sites help people easily find new restaurants and pubs, which is very useful.

× There are a lot of information about baseball, football and basketball and other sports.

✓ There is a lot of information about baseball, football, basketball, and other sports.

'Information' is an uncountable noun, so it should be used with 'a lot of' followed by a singular verb 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, commas are needed to separate items in a list.

× My favorite website is a homepage of the professional rugby league in Japan, and that's mainly because and there are a lot of information about the sport and the athletes.

✓ My favorite website is the homepage of the professional rugby league in Japan, mainly because there is a lot of information about the sport and the athletes.

'Information' is uncountable and should be used with singular verb 'is'. Also, 'a homepage' should be 'the homepage' to specify a particular website. The phrase 'and that's mainly because and there are' is redundant and incorrect; it should be simplified.

× Yes, in last year there were a very big update in the sports Navy apps that's mainly focused on the how to get a much more comfortable to stay and this is very useful for me.

✓ Yes, last year there was a very big update in the sports Navy app that mainly focused on how to make it much more comfortable to use, and this is very useful for me.

'Last year' refers to a past time, so past tense 'was' and 'focused' should be used. 'Update' is singular, so 'was' is correct instead of 'were'. The phrase 'how to get a much more comfortable to stay' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'how to make it much more comfortable to use'. Also, 'apps' should be singular if referring to one app.

× I can spend two or three hours by scrolling the touch screen and this makes me very happy.

✓ I can spend two or three hours scrolling the touchscreen, and this makes me very happy.

The verb 'spend' is followed directly by the gerund without 'by'. Also, 'touch screen' is commonly written as one word 'touchscreen'.

× I think there are some home page about information on the our restaurant is very important in my country because the still the the city of our country is not so white, so you can easily find a new restaurant and a pub.

✓ I think there are some homepages about information on our restaurants, which is very important in my country because the cities in our country are not very large, so you can easily find a new restaurant or a pub.

'Home page' should be plural 'homepages' to match 'some'. 'On the our restaurant' is incorrect; it should be 'on our restaurants'. The phrase 'the still the the city of our country is not so white' is unclear and likely a mishearing; it is corrected to 'the cities in our country are not very large'. Also, 'and a pub' is better as 'or a pub' to indicate alternatives.