Websites— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit long and somewhat unclear. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, pay attention to grammar and sentence structure for natural English.

Ejemplo: I often visit various websites, but my favourite is YouTube because it offers both educational videos that help with my studies and entertaining content for relaxation.

Sugerencia: Your answer repeats information and has grammatical errors. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific supporting details using linking words like 'for example'. Use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy for better clarity.

Ejemplo: My favourite website is YouTube because it provides educational content. For example, during my 12th exams, I watched videos from various teachers which helped me complete my syllabus effectively.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then explain the changes with specific examples using linking words. Avoid vague phrases and improve sentence structure for natural flow.

Ejemplo: Yes, the websites I visit have changed a lot over time. For instance, when I first used YouTube, it had limited content about other countries, but now it offers a wide variety of international videos due to technological advancements.

Sugerencia: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, then list popular websites using linking words like 'such as'. Avoid vague statements and improve grammar for clarity and naturalness.

Ejemplo: There are many popular websites in my country, such as Instagram, WhatsApp, YouTube, Snapchat, Twitter, and Facebook. These platforms are widely used for communication and entertainment.

× I mostly frequent visits youtube.com because it is the biggest source of entertainment that helped me to provide a video regarding my study.

✓ I mostly frequently visit youtube.com because it is the biggest source of entertainment that helps me by providing videos related to my study.

The phrase 'frequent visits' is incorrect because 'frequent' should be an adverb modifying the verb 'visit'. Therefore, 'frequently visit' is correct. Also, 'helped me to provide a video' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me by providing videos' to match the present tense and correct verb form.

× it provide me a content regarding my study.

✓ it provides me content regarding my study.

The verb 'provide' must agree with the third person singular subject 'it', so it should be 'provides'. Also, 'a content' is incorrect because 'content' is uncountable, so the article 'a' should be removed.

× I completed my syllabus after watching a video from YouTube because there are a lot of teachers that provide info.

✓ I completed my syllabus after watching videos on YouTube because there are a lot of teachers who provide information.

The correct preposition with 'YouTube' is 'on' not 'from'. Also, 'a video' is less appropriate here; 'videos' is better as multiple videos are usually watched. 'Teachers that' should be 'teachers who' as 'who' refers to people. 'Info' should be expanded to 'information' for formality.

× the website that I visit are developing day by day due to advancement in technology and Internet as well as I remember when I firstly used YouTube, there was no any content related to about other countries, but now it is still available.

✓ The websites that I visit are developing day by day due to advancements in technology and the Internet. I remember when I first used YouTube, there was no content related to other countries, but now it is available.

'Website' should be plural 'websites' to agree with 'are developing'. 'Advancement' should be plural 'advancements'. 'Internet' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Firstly' is better as 'first'. 'No any content' is incorrect; 'no content' is correct. 'Related to about' is redundant; only 'related to' is needed. 'Still available' is better as 'available' here.

× there are a lot of teachers that provide info.

✓ there are a lot of teachers who provide information.

'Teachers' is plural, so 'that' should be replaced with 'who' for people. 'Info' is informal; 'information' is preferred. This correction improves clarity and formality.

× Well, I cannot be possible to save because there are a lot of websites in my country but I mostly known about a few websites such as Instagram, WhatsApp or YouTube and Snapchat, Twitter, Facebook.

✓ Well, it is not possible to say because there are a lot of websites in my country, but I mostly know about a few websites such as Instagram, WhatsApp, YouTube, Snapchat, Twitter, and Facebook.

'I cannot be possible to save' is incorrect; it should be 'it is not possible to say'. 'Mostly known' should be 'mostly know' to match the subject 'I'. The list of websites should be separated by commas and 'or' replaced with commas for listing. Also, 'say' is the correct verb here.

× there are more website that people use to their entertainment and some website use.

✓ there are more websites that people use for their entertainment and some websites they use for other purposes.

'Website' should be plural 'websites'. The preposition 'to' is incorrect; 'for' is correct with 'entertainment'. The sentence is incomplete; adding 'they use for other purposes' clarifies meaning.