Websites— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid repetition. Also, make your answer more natural by combining ideas and using linking words. For example, instead of repeating 'some information', specify what kind of information you look for and link your sentences smoothly.

Ejemplo: I often visit my university website to check important details, such as the start dates of my classes and contact numbers, because it provides all the information I need in one place.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly name your favourite website and explain why you like it using clear and simple sentences with linking words.

Ejemplo: My favourite website is Wikipedia because whenever I need information on any topic, I visit it. Otherwise, I don't usually browse other websites.

Sugerencia: Your answer is too short and vague. You should provide more details and use linking words to explain how the website has changed over time.

Ejemplo: Yes, Wikipedia has changed a lot over time. For example, it has added more articles and improved its layout, which makes it easier to find information.

Sugerencia: Try to improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be specific about the types of popular websites and reasons for their popularity.

Ejemplo: In my country, political websites are very popular because many people want to stay informed about politics and the activities of politicians, even though they are busy with work.

× I recently visit my university website because I want to know some information when my classes started and some other information.

✓ I recently visited my university website because I wanted to know some information about when my classes started and some other information.

The sentence uses 'visit' and 'want' in present tense while referring to a past event indicated by 'recently' and 'when my classes started'. The verbs should be in past tense to match the time frame. Use 'visited' and 'wanted' instead.

× I need their contact numbers that's why I visit my university website.

✓ I needed their contact numbers, that's why I visited my university website.

The sentence refers to a past need and action, so verbs should be in past tense. 'Need' and 'visit' should be changed to 'needed' and 'visited' to maintain tense consistency.

× There is a note of one website that I favorite because all the website whenever I need some information I visit there, otherwise I don't refer to open any website.

✓ There is one website that I like because whenever I need some information, I visit it; otherwise, I don't open any website.

'Favorite' is incorrectly used as a verb; it should be 'like' or 'favorite' as an adjective. 'All the website' is incorrect; it should be 'whenever I need some information, I visit it'. Also, 'refer to open any website' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't open any website'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yeah, it's a Wikipedia. It's changed over time.

✓ Yeah, it's Wikipedia. It has changed over time.

'It's a Wikipedia' is incorrect because Wikipedia is a proper noun and does not need an article 'a'. Also, 'It's changed' is ambiguous; 'It has changed' is clearer to indicate the present perfect tense showing change over time.

× In my country there is a political website or more famous because in my country every person work not want to know about the politics, what the politics do, how they living.

✓ In my country, political websites are more famous because every person who works wants to know about politics, what politicians do, and how they live.

'A political website or more famous' is incorrect; it should be plural 'political websites are more famous'. 'Every person work not want' is incorrect; it should be 'every person who works wants'. 'The politics' should be 'politics' without 'the'. 'How they living' should be 'how they live'.

× So that's why the politician website is very famous.

✓ So that's why political websites are very famous.

'Politician website' is incorrect; it should be 'political websites' to describe websites related to politics. Also, plural form is appropriate here to match the context.