Part 1
Examinador
What kinds of websites do you often visit?
Candidato
I think I often visit Google Scholar which is the website for me to search about a lot of essay on this website. In addition, I always use this website to complete my homework in order to find a lot of information and reference to support my.
Examinador
What is your favourite website?
Candidato
I think Google is my favorite website because it's like lightsaber. I can search a lot of information in there, for example like restaurant information and reference and some of the ideas on social issue.
Examinador
Are there any changes to the websites you often visit?
Candidato
Honestly no. Especially Google. They always provide the searching box for us. They haven't any other function, therefore they always remain unchanged. However, I think Google maybe need to have some new functions, for example like AI.
Examinador
What kinds of websites are popular in your country?
Candidato
Definitely Google because everyone want to search something. They always use Google. For example when they feel safe they will try to search why they feel uncomfortable. Also we always rely on the Google because Google is the useful tone for us.
What kinds of websites do you often visit?
Puntuación: 65.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,且内容重复。建议简化句子结构,避免冗余,并使用更准确的词汇表达。
Ejemplo: I often visit Google Scholar because it helps me find academic essays and reliable information to support my homework.
What is your favourite website?
Puntuación: 70.0Sugerencia: 比喻“lightsaber”不够恰当,表达略显混乱。建议使用更贴切的比喻或直接说明原因,并注意句子连贯性。
Ejemplo: My favorite website is Google because it allows me to quickly find information on various topics, such as restaurants and social issues.
Are there any changes to the websites you often visit?
Puntuación: 60.0Sugerencia: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的句型,避免重复,并且逻辑连接词使用更自然。
Ejemplo: No, the websites I visit, especially Google, have not changed much. They mainly offer a search box, but I think adding new features like AI could improve them.
What kinds of websites are popular in your country?
Puntuación: 55.0Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题,且内容不够具体。建议使用更准确的表达,避免模糊和重复,并提供具体例子。
Ejemplo: Google is very popular in my country because people use it to search for information on various topics, such as health concerns or daily needs.
× I think I often visit Google Scholar which is the website for me to search about a lot of essay on this website.
✓ I think I often visit Google Scholar, which is the website for me to search about a lot of essays on this website.
essay 是可数名词,表示多篇文章时应使用复数形式 essays。
× I think I often visit Google Scholar which is the website for me to search about a lot of essay on this website.
✓ I think I often visit Google Scholar, which is the website for me to search for a lot of essays on this website.
动词 search 后应接介词 for,表示“搜索某物”,而不是 about。
× In addition, I always use this website to complete my homework in order to find a lot of information and reference to support my.
✓ In addition, I always use this website to complete my homework in order to find a lot of information and references to support me.
句子末尾缺少宾语,reference 应为复数 references,且 support 后应接宾语 me。
× I think I often visit Google Scholar which is the website for me to search about a lot of essay on this website.
✓ I think I often visit Google Scholar, which is the website for me to search for many essays on this website.
a lot of 用于口语较多,正式表达中 many 更合适,且 essay 应为复数。
× In addition, I always use this website to complete my homework in order to find a lot of information and reference to support my.
✓ In addition, I always use this website to complete my homework in order to find a lot of information and references to support myself.
support 后应使用反身代词 myself,而不是 my。
× I think Google is my favorite website because it's like lightsaber.
✓ I think Google is my favorite website because it's like a lightsaber.
lightsaber 是可数名词,前面应加不定冠词 a。
× I can search a lot of information in there, for example like restaurant information and reference and some of the ideas on social issue.
✓ I can search for a lot of information there, for example, restaurant information, references, and some ideas on social issues.
search 后应接介词 for;in there 改为 there 更自然;reference 应为复数 references;social issue 应为复数 social issues。
× I can search a lot of information in there, for example like restaurant information and reference and some of the ideas on social issue.
✓ I can search for a lot of information there, for example, restaurant information, references, and some ideas on social issues.
reference 和 social issue 应使用复数形式。
× Honestly no. Especially Google. They always provide the searching box for us.
✓ Honestly, no. Especially Google. It always provides the search box for us.
Google 是单数,代词应使用 it;provide 应用第三人称单数形式 provides。
× They always provide the searching box for us.
✓ It always provides the search box for us.
Google 是单数名词,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 provides。
× They haven't any other function, therefore they always remain unchanged.
✓ It doesn't have any other functions; therefore, it always remains unchanged.
否定句中应使用 doesn't have;function 应为复数 functions;主语为单数,谓语动词也应为单数形式 remains。
× They haven't any other function, therefore they always remain unchanged.
✓ It doesn't have any other functions; therefore, it always remains unchanged.
主语 Google 是单数,谓语动词应使用单数形式 doesn't have 和 remains。
× However, I think Google maybe need to have some new functions, for example like AI.
✓ However, I think Google may need to have some new functions, for example, AI.
may 是情态动词,后面应接动词原形 need,而不是 need to have。
× for example like AI.
✓ for example, AI.
for example 和 like 都表示举例,二者不应连用,去掉 like 更合适。
× Definitely Google because everyone want to search something.
✓ Definitely Google because everyone wants to search for something.
everyone 是单数,谓语动词应使用 wants;search 后应接介词 for。
× Definitely Google because everyone want to search something.
✓ Definitely Google because everyone wants to search for something.
主语 everyone 是单数,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 wants。
× Definitely Google because everyone want to search something.
✓ Definitely Google because everyone wants to search for something.
search 后应接介词 for,表示“搜索某物”。
× For example when they feel safe they will try to search why they feel uncomfortable.
✓ For example, when they feel unsafe, they will try to search why they feel uncomfortable.
feel safe 与后文 feel uncomfortable 意义矛盾,应改为 feel unsafe。
× Also we always rely on the Google because Google is the useful tone for us.
✓ Also, we always rely on Google because Google is a useful tool for us.
rely on 后面不加定冠词 the;useful 是形容词,tool 拼写错误;tool 是可数名词,前面应加不定冠词 a。