Challenges— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be improved by correcting grammar (e.g., 'math was a big challenge' instead of 'math is'), avoiding redundancy, and using more precise vocabulary. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep the answer within 5 sentences.

Ejemplo: When I was in high school, I found mathematics to be the most challenging subject. Although I understood the concepts and terminology well, I often made careless mistakes during exams. Consequently, these errors significantly lowered my marks. This experience taught me the importance of careful attention to detail.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows enthusiasm, but it would benefit from grammatical corrections (e.g., 'I like making challenges' should be 'I like to challenge myself'), removal of fillers like 'umm', and more precise linking words to improve coherence. Also, try to expand slightly with specific examples within the sentence limit.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy challenging myself in daily life because it brings excitement and pushes me out of my comfort zone. For instance, I often try new sports that I haven't experienced before, which helps me develop new skills and confidence.

Sugerencia: Your response is thoughtful but could be improved by correcting grammar (e.g., 'cause me anxious' should be 'make me anxious'), avoiding redundancy, and using linking words like 'although' instead of 'even though... but'. Also, try to be more concise and specific.

Ejemplo: I generally prefer a life full of challenges. Although they sometimes make me anxious and uncertain about the future, they motivate me to find solutions and keep striving to improve my life.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and well-structured, but it can be improved by using more natural phrases (e.g., 'get myself collected' could be 'compose myself'), and by adding linking words to enhance coherence. Also, try to use a wider range of vocabulary and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: When facing challenges, I first try to calm myself and compose my thoughts. Then, I relate the situation to my past experiences and consider possible solutions. For example, if I encounter difficult homework, I attempt to solve it independently before seeking help from others.

× So when I was in high school, math is a big challenge for me.

✓ So when I was in high school, math was a big challenge for me.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was in high school'), so the verb should be in the past tense to maintain consistency. Using 'is' (present tense) here is incorrect; it should be 'was' to match the past context.

× I often made some careless mistakes, which was very important in the exams because that really deduced my marks.

✓ I often made some careless mistakes, which were very important in the exams because that really reduced my marks.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'mistakes' (plural), so the verb should be plural 'were' instead of 'was'. Also, 'deduced' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'reduced' meaning 'lowered'.

× Yes, I have to say, in general I like to making challenges for myself in the daily life because they really bring some excitement and pushes me to go out of my comfort zone.

✓ Yes, I have to say, in general I like to make challenges for myself in daily life because they really bring some excitement and push me to go out of my comfort zone.

After 'like to', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. So 'like to making' is incorrect; it should be 'like to make'. Also, 'pushes' should be 'push' to agree with the plural subject 'they'.

× I like to try some new sports I haven't tried before.

✓ I like to try some new sports that I haven't tried before.

The sentence is missing the relative pronoun 'that' to connect the clauses properly. Adding 'that' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Even though sometimes challenges will cause me anxious and very uncertain about the future, but in general it motivates me to find the solutions and keep going to make a better life for myself.

✓ Even though sometimes challenges cause me anxiety and make me very uncertain about the future, in general they motivate me to find solutions and keep going to make a better life for myself.

Using both 'Even though' and 'but' together is redundant; one should be removed. Also, 'cause me anxious' is incorrect; it should be 'cause me anxiety'. The phrase 'very uncertain' needs a verb, so 'make me very uncertain' is correct. 'It' should be 'they' to refer to 'challenges' (plural). 'The solutions' should be 'solutions' as it is general.

× After that, I will link it to my daily experience and think of some possible solutions.

✓ After that, I will relate it to my daily experience and think of some possible solutions.

The verb 'link' is not typically used with 'to' in this context. 'Relate' is more appropriate when connecting an issue to experience. Alternatively, 'connect it with' could be used.