Challenges— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains several hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically and avoid redundancy. Also, be specific about the subject and why it was challenging.

Ejemplo: I think physics is the most challenging subject for me because it combines concepts from physics and chemistry, and there are many formulas to memorize. For example, learning chemical reactions in physics was difficult and affected my performance.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and some awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb tenses and smoother transitions. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'um'. Provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy challenging myself because it boosts my confidence. For instance, last year I visited Rishikesh and tried bungee jumping. Although it was scary, it helped me overcome my fear of heights and appreciate nature more closely.

Sugerencia: Your answer repeats ideas and has grammatical errors. Try to avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect your ideas clearly. Use correct verb forms and provide specific examples to support your opinion.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like living a life full of challenges because they help me learn and grow. For example, last year I visited Rishikesh and tried bungee jumping and paragliding, which increased my courage and motivated me for future challenges.

Sugerencia: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to give a complete response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use appropriate vocabulary and linking words to make your answer coherent and natural.

Ejemplo: When I face challenges, I usually take a deep breath to calm myself. Then, I talk with my friends who give me valuable advice and encouragement, which helps boost my confidence to handle the situation.

× Well, in my life, I have studied various type of subjects, but if I talk about such a challenging subject and I feel that it was the most and other than it is a size, uh, it is a mixture of three subjects like physical mystery and uh, umm, you know, physics and there was a lot of formulas and sometimes I had to learn about the reaction, which is mainly used in a chemistry. So it really impacted to my performance.

✓ Well, in my life, I have studied various types of subjects, but if I talk about such a challenging subject, I feel that it was the most. Other than it is a science, uh, it is a mixture of three subjects like physical chemistry and, uh, umm, you know, physics, and there were a lot of formulas, and sometimes I had to learn about reactions, which are mainly used in chemistry. So it really impacted my performance.

The phrase 'various type of subjects' should be 'various types of subjects' because 'various' requires a plural noun. 'There was a lot of formulas' should be 'there were a lot of formulas' because 'formulas' is plural. 'The reaction' should be 'reactions' to match plural usage. Also, 'impacted to my performance' is incorrect; it should be 'impacted my performance' without 'to'. These corrections ensure proper singular/plural agreement and correct verb usage.

× Last year, uh, I was visited in Rishikesh there.

✓ Last year, uh, I visited Rishikesh there.

The phrase 'I was visited' is incorrect because 'visit' is an active verb here, and the speaker is the subject performing the action. The correct past tense form is 'I visited'. Using 'was visited' would imply passive voice, which is not appropriate in this context.

× I have tried the bungee jumping.

✓ I tried bungee jumping.

The present perfect 'have tried' is less appropriate here because the speaker refers to a specific past event (last year). The simple past 'tried' is more suitable. Also, 'the bungee jumping' should be 'bungee jumping' without 'the' as it is an activity, not a specific object.

× I got a chance to try to experience the nature closely and then also overcome my uh, height, uh, fear also.

✓ I got a chance to experience nature closely and also overcome my fear of heights.

The phrase 'try to experience the nature closely' is awkward; 'experience nature closely' is clearer. 'Overcome my height fear' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'fear of heights'. Prepositions must be used correctly to convey meaning clearly.

× I really like to live a life which is a full of challenges because each time I got a chance to learn something new, which really enhance my enthusiasms and or motivate me to do something interesting uh, in my life.

✓ I really like to live a life that is full of challenges because each time I get a chance to learn something new, which really enhances my enthusiasm and motivates me to do something interesting in my life.

'Which is a full of challenges' should be 'that is full of challenges' for correct relative pronoun and article usage. 'Each time I got' should be 'each time I get' to maintain present tense consistency. 'Enhance my enthusiasms' should be 'enhances my enthusiasm' for subject-verb agreement and correct noun form. 'Or motivate me' should be 'and motivates me' to correctly connect ideas.

× Last year I visited Rishikesh there I have uh, tried the bungee jumping or paragliding, which really enhance my courage and now in future.

✓ Last year I visited Rishikesh where I tried bungee jumping and paragliding, which really enhanced my courage and will help me in the future.

'I have tried' should be 'I tried' to match the past time reference. 'Enhance' should be 'enhanced' to agree with past tense. 'Now in future' is awkward; 'will help me in the future' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Most of the times I prefer to take a long breath prior to try something new things.

✓ Most of the time I prefer to take a deep breath before trying something new.

'Most of the times' should be 'most of the time' as 'time' is uncountable here. 'Take a long breath' is better expressed as 'take a deep breath'. 'Prior to try' should be 'before trying' to use the correct preposition and gerund form. 'Something new things' is redundant; 'something new' suffices.

× I prefer to conversate with my friend who always given me some valuation suggestions and even encourage me which really enhance my confidence level.

✓ I prefer to talk with my friend who always gives me valuable suggestions and even encourages me, which really enhances my confidence level.

'Conversate' is nonstandard; 'talk' or 'converse' is preferred. 'Who always given me' should be 'who always gives me' for subject-verb agreement. 'Valuation suggestions' is incorrect; 'valuable suggestions' is correct. 'Encourage me which' should be 'encourages me, which' with proper verb form and punctuation. 'Enhance' should be 'enhances' to agree with singular subject.