Holidays— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more natural. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, clarify phrases like 'asking on cake' which is unclear. Try to use more precise vocabulary and keep sentences concise.

Ejemplo: I spent my last holiday in Haryana because I enjoy hilly areas and trekking. We also visited the famous Sector 13 market, which offers many items at affordable prices. Moreover, bargaining there is common, which I find quite enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Your answer conveys your feelings well but can be improved by correcting grammar and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas and replace idioms with clearer expressions. Also, try to be more specific about how holidays boost your productivity and creativity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like holidays because, as a student, they help me refresh my mind. Additionally, holidays boost my productivity and creativity. I feel very happy during holidays, and spending time with my family makes it even more special.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by making sentences clearer and more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague phrases like 'kind of'. Also, explain why you like Holi to add more content.

Ejemplo: My favourite public holiday is Holi, the festival of colors. We get a week off during this time. People joyfully apply colors to each other to express love and happiness, which makes the festival very special to me.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, be more specific about the activities you do and why you enjoy them.

Ejemplo: Usually, I relax during holidays. If I am in hilly areas, I prefer boating or trekking. However, when I am at home, I enjoy extracurricular activities like dancing, playing sports, or making crafts to decorate my room.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and grammar correction. The phrase 'make my bone more stronger' is unclear; perhaps you meant 'bond'. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain how spending time at home helps you become more confident.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like spending my day at home because it helps me strengthen my bond with my family. Besides, I can take short naps to refresh myself and have some personal time to build my confidence.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and explain your preference with specific reasons.

Ejemplo: I always prefer a leisurely holiday because it keeps me energetic. Moreover, I can focus better on my planned activities. When I rush, I tend to make mistakes, so a slow holiday suits me best.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows good ideas but needs grammar correction and clearer expression. The phrase 'cherry pink sounds' is unclear; consider replacing it with more accurate descriptions. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about how peaceful holidays help you.

Ejemplo: Sometimes, I prefer exciting holidays with my cousins or friends. However, when I am alone, I enjoy peaceful holidays because they help me relax and focus on my surroundings. For example, sitting in a garden, I can observe birds singing and enjoy the fragrance of flowers.

× My last holiday, I spend it in Haryana as I really like hilly areas and we did a lot of trekking there.

✓ My last holiday, I spent it in Haryana as I really like hilly areas and we did a lot of trekking there.

The verb 'spend' should be in past tense 'spent' to match the past time frame indicated by 'My last holiday'. This maintains tense consistency in the sentence.

× It is kind of a cheap market which has a lot of things in a throwback price and you also get a lot of discount and bargaining which is asking on cake for me.

✓ It is kind of a cheap market which has a lot of things at throwback prices and you also get a lot of discounts and bargaining which is icing on the cake for me.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'at' is used with prices. Also, 'discount' should be plural 'discounts' to match 'a lot of'. The phrase 'asking on cake' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'icing on the cake'. These corrections improve clarity and idiomatic usage.

× Yes, I do like holidays because as I'm academic student so I really like to refresh my mind and the holiday help me a lot to do this kind of things.

✓ Yes, I do like holidays because as I'm an academic student, I really like to refresh my mind and the holiday helps me a lot to do these kinds of things.

The article 'an' is needed before 'academic student'. The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'holiday'. 'This kind of things' should be 'these kinds of things' for correct quantifier and plural form.

× Apart from that it really boosts my productivity and creativity and I always feel feel over the moon while spending holidays and if I'm with the family it's like icing on the cake for me.

✓ Apart from that, it really boosts my productivity and creativity and I always feel over the moon while spending holidays and if I'm with the family, it's like icing on the cake for me.

Commas are added after introductory phrase 'Apart from that' and before 'it's' to improve sentence clarity and correct punctuation.

× The one public holiday that I really like is the Holi festival that we get holidays for one week in this occasion and it is a kind of festival of colors and most people put colors on each other in kind of a happiness to show their love to towards the next person.

✓ The one public holiday that I really like is the Holi festival for which we get holidays for one week on this occasion. It is a kind of festival of colors and most people put colors on each other in happiness to show their love towards the next person.

'Holidays for one week in this occasion' is rephrased for clarity. 'In kind of a happiness' is corrected to 'in happiness'. 'To towards' is redundant; only 'towards' is needed. These changes correct plural and prepositional errors and improve sentence structure.

× Usually I do some kind of relaxation on holidays and if I'm in hilly areas then I will always then I always prefer to do boating or trekking.

✓ Usually, I do some kind of relaxation on holidays and if I'm in hilly areas, then I always prefer to do boating or trekking.

The repeated phrase 'then I will always then I always' is corrected to 'then I always' to fix redundancy and improve sentence flow. Commas are added for clarity.

× Apart from that, if I'm in my own home then I always prefer to do some other curriculum activities like dancing, sports or doing any kind of craft that I can put in my room to enhance the beauty of my room.

✓ Apart from that, if I'm at my own home, then I always prefer to do some other extracurricular activities like dancing, sports or doing any kind of craft that I can put in my room to enhance its beauty.

The preposition 'in' is corrected to 'at' for location 'my own home'. 'Curriculum activities' is corrected to 'extracurricular activities' which is the appropriate term. Repetition of 'my room' is reduced by replacing the second with 'its'.

× Yes, I do like to spend my day at home as whenever I spend time in home I get I make my bone more stronger with my family.

✓ Yes, I do like to spend my day at home as whenever I spend time at home, I make my bond stronger with my family.

The preposition 'in' is corrected to 'at' for 'home'. The phrase 'I get I make my bone more stronger' is corrected to 'I make my bond stronger' to fix pronoun misuse and word choice errors.

× Besides that I can easily take a short nap to restart myself and also I can get some time for myself to be more confident.

✓ Besides that, I can easily take a short nap to refresh myself and also I can get some time for myself to become more confident.

'Restart myself' is not idiomatic; 'refresh myself' is appropriate. 'Be more confident' is corrected to 'become more confident' for proper verb usage. Comma added after 'Besides that' for clarity.

× I always prefer a leisurely holiday because it didn't make me lethargic.

✓ I always prefer a leisurely holiday because it doesn't make me lethargic.

The verb tense should be present tense 'doesn't' to agree with the habitual preference expressed by 'I always prefer'. 'Didn't' is past tense and inconsistent here.

× Besides that it make me feel over the moon because whenever I did something in hurry I always mess messed up with the thing.

✓ Besides that, it makes me feel over the moon because whenever I do something in a hurry, I always mess up with the thing.

The verb 'make' is corrected to 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Did' is changed to 'do' to maintain present tense consistency. 'Mess messed up' is corrected to 'mess up'. Article 'a' is added before 'hurry'.

× So I always prefer a slow holiday rather than.

✓ So I always prefer a slow holiday rather than a busy one.

The sentence is incomplete; adding 'a busy one' completes the comparison and improves sentence structure.

× Sometimes I prefer exciting holidays when I'm with my cousins or friend but when I'm alone I always prefer peaceful holiday because it really help me to restart myself and I can easily concentrate on the things that are happening around me.

✓ Sometimes I prefer exciting holidays when I'm with my cousins or friends but when I'm alone I always prefer a peaceful holiday because it really helps me to refresh myself and I can easily concentrate on the things that are happening around me.

'Friend' is corrected to plural 'friends' to match 'cousins'. 'Peaceful holiday' needs article 'a'. 'Help' is corrected to 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Restart myself' is better expressed as 'refresh myself'.

× Like if I'm sitting in a garden I can easily observe the birds and their cherry pink sounds and the smell of flowers and just beauty.

✓ Like if I'm sitting in a garden, I can easily observe the birds and their chirping sounds, the smell of flowers, and just the beauty.

Commas are added for clarity. 'Cherry pink sounds' is incorrect; corrected to 'chirping sounds' which is appropriate for birds. 'Just beauty' is corrected to 'just the beauty' for grammatical correctness.