Holidays— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh dùng các cụm từ không chính xác như "assemble a lot of specialty involving" và nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy hơn. Hãy tập trung vào việc mô tả địa điểm, lý do bạn chọn nơi đó và hoạt động bạn đã làm một cách cụ thể và ngắn gọn.

Ejemplo: Last holiday, I went to FUI, which is located in central Vietnam. I chose this place because it has many beautiful beaches and scenic landscapes. I traveled there with my family to explore Vietnamese culture and try local specialties.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn, ví dụ "ride" nên thay bằng "spend time" hoặc "travel". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ. Hãy dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và giải thích cụ thể hơn về lý do bạn thích kỳ nghỉ.

Ejemplo: Yes, I definitely like holidays because they give me a chance to relax and spend quality time with my family and friends. I can also do activities I enjoy but don't have time for during workdays. However, sometimes holiday destinations can be overcrowded, which is a downside.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần nói rõ tên ngày lễ và tránh dùng các cụm từ không chính xác như "set aside my bucket to do lots of interest". Hãy trình bày câu trả lời ngắn gọn, có cấu trúc rõ ràng và dùng từ vựng phù hợp để mô tả hoạt động trong ngày lễ.

Ejemplo: My favorite public holiday is the 10th day of the lunar new year, which is very important in Vietnam. During this time, I visit my relatives and receive lucky money, which I save to spend on my hobbies.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ "enjoy to do" nên là "enjoy doing". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ. Cố gắng thêm chi tiết cụ thể về hoạt động bạn làm để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

Ejemplo: Usually, I enjoy doing sports during holidays. I pursue my hobbies like playing badminton and swimming to keep fit and improve my health. Exercising during holidays helps me feel refreshed.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "enjoy to do some to doing some" nên sửa thành "enjoy doing some". Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ phù hợp như "communicate with other people" và tránh lặp từ. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: To be honest, although I am introverted, I don't like spending my days at home because it feels boring and a waste of time. I prefer doing outdoor activities to improve my health and interact with other people.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "refer a leisurely, partly and busy holiday". Hãy trả lời rõ ràng hơn, dùng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: It's hard to choose, but I prefer a holiday that is partly leisurely and partly busy. I like to spend time pursuing my interests, going out with my family, and relaxing with friends.

Sugerencia: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng, ví dụ "refer a peaceful day" nên là "prefer a peaceful holiday". Câu trả lời nên hoàn chỉnh và rõ ràng, tránh câu bị dang dở như "just going to the teacher to". Hãy dùng câu đơn giản, mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn.

Ejemplo: I prefer a peaceful holiday because many popular destinations are overcrowded. I enjoy spending time quietly with my family at a coffee shop or relaxing at home.

× In my last holiday I went to FUI, it is located in the middle of Vietnam and because it has a lot of beautiful beaches and scenery landscapes, so I went in with my family to explore more about the culture of Vietnam and assemble a lot of specialty involving.

✓ In my last holiday, I went to FUI, which is located in the middle of Vietnam. Because it has a lot of beautiful beaches and scenic landscapes, I went there with my family to explore more about the culture of Vietnam and try many specialties.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence with improper conjunctions and structure. Breaking it into shorter sentences and using correct conjunctions improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× because it has a lot of beautiful beaches and scenery landscapes

✓ because it has a lot of beautiful beaches and scenic landscapes

The adjective 'scenery' is incorrect here; the correct adjective form is 'scenic' to describe landscapes.

× so I went in with my family to explore more about the culture of Vietnam

✓ so I went with my family to explore more about the culture of Vietnam

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary and incorrect in this context; 'went with my family' is the correct phrase.

× I really like holidays because it's a time that I can relax and ride with my family or friends and also I can do a lot of things that I want and in my spare time that I cannot do so.

✓ I really like holidays because it's a time when I can relax and ride with my family or friends, and also do a lot of things that I want but cannot do in my spare time.

The sentence has awkward phrasing and tense inconsistency. Using 'when' instead of 'that' and simplifying the structure improves clarity and correctness.

× But it is so overcrowded when I go holidays.

✓ But it is so overcrowded when I go on holidays.

The correct preposition is 'on' when referring to 'go on holidays'.

× The public holidays that I like best is the 10th of the day, which is one of the most important event and holiday in Vietnam

✓ The public holiday that I like best is the 10th day, which is one of the most important events and holidays in Vietnam

Subject-verb agreement and singular/plural forms are incorrect. 'Holiday' should be singular to match 'is', and 'event' and 'holiday' should be plural to match 'one of the'.

× I can visit some of my relatives and receive a lot of lucky money to set aside my bucket to do lots of interest that I like.

✓ I can visit some of my relatives and receive a lot of lucky money to save for my bucket list to do many interests that I like.

The phrase 'set aside my bucket' is incorrect; it should be 'save for my bucket list'. Also, 'lots of interest' should be 'many interests'.

× Usually I really enjoy to do a lot of sport so I try to pursue my hobbies like doing badminton, going swimming on the holidays to shape my fitness and also enhance my health.

✓ Usually, I really enjoy doing a lot of sports, so I try to pursue my hobbies like playing badminton and swimming during the holidays to improve my fitness and enhance my health.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by the gerund form 'doing'. Also, 'sport' should be plural 'sports', and 'going swimming' should be 'swimming' or 'playing badminton'.

× So I really enjoy to do exercise on holidays.

✓ So I really enjoy doing exercise on holidays.

After 'enjoy', the verb should be in the gerund form 'doing', not the infinitive 'to do'.

× I don't like to spend my day at home because I think it is so tedious and waste of time.

✓ I don't like to spend my day at home because I think it is so tedious and a waste of time.

The phrase 'waste of time' needs the article 'a' before it.

× So I really enjoy to do some to doing some outdoor activities to enhance my health and communicate with other person.

✓ So I really enjoy doing some outdoor activities to enhance my health and communicate with other people.

'Enjoy' should be followed by the gerund 'doing'. Also, 'other person' should be plural 'other people'.

× That is a tough question that I cannot choose, but I really refer a leisurely, partly and busy holiday because I want to do something that meaningful in the holiday like pursuing my interest and have the free time to go outside with my family and also relax and invite with my friends on the holidays.

✓ That is a tough question that I cannot choose, but I really prefer a leisurely, partly busy holiday because I want to do something meaningful during the holiday like pursuing my interests, having free time to go outside with my family, and also relaxing and hanging out with my friends during the holidays.

The verb 'refer' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer'. Also, 'partly and busy' is awkward; 'partly busy' is better. 'Invite with my friends' is incorrect; 'hanging out with my friends' or 'spending time with my friends' is appropriate.

× Because some of destination that on holiday are always overcrowded and everyone always blocked destination.

✓ Because some destinations during holidays are always overcrowded and everyone always blocks the destinations.

'Some of destination' should be 'some destinations'. 'That on holiday' should be 'during holidays'. 'Blocked destination' is incorrect; 'blocks the destinations' is correct.

× So I would refer a peaceful day like spending time with my family at the coffee shop all day or just going to the teacher to.

✓ So I would prefer a peaceful day like spending time with my family at the coffee shop all day or just going to the theater.

'Refer' should be 'prefer'. 'Going to the teacher to' is incorrect; likely intended 'going to the theater'.