Holidays— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more concise and clear. Start with a direct response to the question, then add specific details about Chiang Mai. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases like "I want to be honest and now I mean my holiday."

Ejemplo: My last holiday was in Chiang Mai, the second biggest city in Thailand. It is a great place to relax because the cost of living is low and the quality of life is high. I really enjoyed my time there.

Sugerencia: Use more natural expressions and avoid negative words like "disgusting" when talking about work. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love holidays because they give me a chance to refresh and take a break from my work. They help me change my environment and enjoy my free time.

Sugerencia: Avoid filler words like "uh" and incomplete sentences. Make your answer complete and clear. Use linking words to explain your opinion logically.

Ejemplo: I prefer the national holiday because it lasts almost a week, giving me more time to relax. However, I think it's not the best time to travel because many people are on holiday, making places crowded.

Sugerencia: Use correct verb tenses and clearer sentence structures. Also, provide specific examples of places you like to travel to.

Ejemplo: On public holidays, I usually stay at home and meet my close friends. But during my company's holidays, I like to travel to places such as the beach or mountains.

Sugerencia: Try to use more natural expressions and correct verb tenses. Also, connect your ideas with linking words for better flow.

Ejemplo: It depends on the situation. If I have only a short time to relax or during public holidays, I prefer to stay at home because it is quieter than outside.

Sugerencia: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

Ejemplo: I prefer a leisurely holiday because I don't like to plan every detail. I prefer to let things happen naturally and enjoy the moment.

Sugerencia: Use consistent verb tenses and more natural phrases. Also, try to avoid repetition and use linking words to connect your ideas.

Ejemplo: I prefer peaceful holidays because I am a slow-paced person who enjoys taking time to relax. Peaceful holidays allow me to fully enjoy the atmosphere and observe my surroundings.

× I want to be honest and now I mean my holiday and I am in Chiang Mai, the second biggest city in Thailand, which is a leisure place to relax yourself and living here you don't cost too much to have a high quality life.

✓ I want to be honest and now I mean my holiday. I am in Chiang Mai, the second biggest city in Thailand, which is a leisure place to relax yourself. Living here doesn't cost too much to have a high quality life.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence and mixes tenses and structures improperly. Breaking it into shorter sentences improves clarity and corrects verb agreement ('living here you don't cost' should be 'living here doesn't cost'). Suggestion: Use shorter sentences and ensure subject-verb agreement in present tense.

× which is a leisure place to relax yourself and living here you don't cost too much to have a high quality life.

✓ which is a leisure place to relax yourself, and living here doesn't cost too much to have a high quality life.

The phrase 'you don't cost too much' incorrectly uses 'you' as the subject for 'cost'. The correct subject is 'living here', so the verb should agree with it ('doesn't cost'). Suggestion: Match the subject and verb correctly and avoid mixing pronouns improperly.

× If I was in public holiday I tend to stay at home and meet some of my close friends, but if I was in my own company holidays I tend to arrange travel to some place I have.

✓ If I was on a public holiday, I tend to stay at home and meet some of my close friends, but if I am on my own company holidays, I tend to arrange travel to some places I have.

The phrase 'If I was in public holiday' is incorrect; it should be 'If I am on a public holiday' to match the habitual present tense 'I tend'. Also, 'in' should be 'on' for holidays, and 'some place I have' is unclear and should be 'some places I have'. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions with holidays ('on a holiday'), and maintain consistent tense for habitual actions.

× If I was in public holiday I tend to stay at home and meet some of my close friends, but if I was in my own company holidays I tend to arrange travel to some place I have.

✓ If I am on a public holiday, I tend to stay at home and meet some of my close friends, but if I am on my own company holidays, I tend to arrange travel to some places I have.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to holidays; the correct preposition is 'on'. Suggestion: Use 'on' with holidays (e.g., 'on a public holiday').

× Living here you don't cost too much to have a high quality life.

✓ Living here doesn't cost too much to have a high quality life.

The subject 'Living here' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'doesn't cost' instead of 'don't cost'. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement in third person singular form.

× I prefer the peaceful ones because I am a low paced person and tended to enjoy things slowly, so I think peaceful holidays can give me more time to fully enjoy my atmosphere and to observe my surroundings.

✓ I prefer the peaceful ones because I am a low-paced person and tend to enjoy things slowly, so I think peaceful holidays can give me more time to fully enjoy my atmosphere and to observe my surroundings.

The phrase 'I am a low paced person and tended to enjoy' mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'Tended' should be 'tend' to match present tense. Also, 'low paced' should be hyphenated as 'low-paced'. Suggestion: Maintain consistent tense and use hyphenation for compound adjectives.