Holidays— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to provide a clear and grammatically correct answer with specific details about the place you visited. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: I went to Guangzhou, a city located in the south of China, for my last holiday with my friends. It was a beautiful city with many interesting places to visit, such as parks and museums. I really enjoyed exploring the local culture and cuisine during my stay.

Sugerencia: Make sure your answer is complete and grammatically correct. Clearly explain why you like holidays and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: Yes, I definitely like holidays because they give me plenty of time to relax and do whatever I enjoy. For example, I can spend time with my family or pursue my hobbies without feeling stressed.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear answer naming the public holiday you prefer and explain why. Avoid confusing or unrelated information and use linking words to clarify your points.

Ejemplo: My favourite public holiday is the Spring Festival, which is the Chinese New Year. I like it because it is a time for family reunions and traditional celebrations, such as fireworks and special meals.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clearly what you do on holidays. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, and link your ideas logically.

Ejemplo: On holidays, I usually spend my time relaxing by browsing social media and sharing funny videos with my friends. This helps me feel relaxed and enjoy my free time.

Sugerencia: Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar. Provide specific activities you enjoy at home and organise your answer with linking words.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy spending my day at home because I can do activities I like, such as playing video games, browsing social media, and cooking delicious meals for myself.

Sugerencia: Clarify your preference between leisurely or busy holiday. Use correct vocabulary and grammar, and explain your reasons clearly with supporting details.

Ejemplo: I prefer a leisurely holiday because it allows me to relax and enjoy my time without stress. For instance, I like to spend my holidays at the beach, reading books and taking things at my own pace.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear answer stating your preference and explain why. Use complete sentences and linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ejemplo: I prefer a peaceful holiday because it helps me feel calm and relaxed. For example, I enjoy spending time on the beach or exploring new places at a slow pace without feeling rushed.

× OK, I go to umm city, locate the South exchange of China and it was so beautiful city and I went I went there for my last holiday with my friends.

✓ OK, I went to a city located in the south of China and it was a very beautiful city. I went there for my last holiday with my friends.

The sentence incorrectly uses the present tense 'go' when referring to a past event. The verb should be in the past tense 'went' to match the time frame of the holiday. Also, 'locate' should be 'located' to describe the city's position, and articles are needed before 'city'.

× OK, I go to umm city, locate the South exchange of China and it was so beautiful city and I went I went there for my last holiday with my friends.

✓ OK, I went to a city located in the south of China and it was a very beautiful city. I went there for my last holiday with my friends.

The phrase 'locate the South exchange of China' is incorrect. It should be 'located in the south of China' to correctly express the city's location using the preposition 'in'.

× OK, I go to umm city, locate the South exchange of China and it was so beautiful city and I went I went there for my last holiday with my friends.

✓ OK, I went to a city located in the south of China and it was a very beautiful city. I went there for my last holiday with my friends.

The noun 'city' requires an article before it. 'A city' is correct when referring to a city for the first time, and 'a very beautiful city' needs the article 'a' to be grammatically correct.

× Definitely I like holiday because the holiday we're giving a lot of time that I can do whatever I want to do and a holiday we can I I didn't in a most stress or.

✓ Definitely, I like holidays because they give me a lot of time to do whatever I want, and during holidays, I am not very stressed.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness, including subject-verb agreement and proper tense usage.

× Definitely I like holiday because the holiday we're giving a lot of time that I can do whatever I want to do and a holiday we can I I didn't in a most stress or.

✓ Definitely, I like holidays because they give me a lot of time to do whatever I want, and during holidays, I am not very stressed.

The word 'holiday' should be plural 'holidays' when speaking generally. Also, 'we're giving' is incorrect; it should be 'they give' to agree with the plural subject 'holidays'.

× OK, the public holiday I prefer, I think I will prefer the Supreme Court Day because you know they are in China.

✓ OK, the public holiday I prefer is the Supreme Court Day because, you know, it is in China.

The sentence mixes tenses and has unclear pronoun references. 'They are' should be 'it is' to refer to a singular holiday, and the future tense 'I will prefer' is unnecessary when stating a current preference.

× We have the Springfield Hospital Festival and or celebrate the the new year is coming.

✓ We have the Springfield Hospital Festival, and we also celebrate the coming New Year.

The conjunction 'and or' is incorrect. Use 'and' or 'or' appropriately. Also, the sentence needs restructuring for clarity and correct article usage.

× Do you know the holiday was a plenty of time that can and that I can do whatever I enjoy.

✓ Do you know, holidays provide plenty of time during which I can do whatever I enjoy.

The phrase 'was a plenty of time that can' is incorrect. 'Provide plenty of time during which' correctly uses prepositions to express the idea.

× Then first thing I would scolding my social media and share the funny video to my friends and and it will make me feel so relaxed.

✓ The first thing I would do is scroll through my social media and share funny videos with my friends, which makes me feel very relaxed.

The verb 'scolding' is incorrect; it should be 'scrolling'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs rephrasing for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I like to spend my day at home because you know at home I can do whatever I enjoy such like play video games and scolding the social media and also I can cook by myself and I will cook a delicious food for me at my par umm.

✓ Yes, I like to spend my day at home because I can do whatever I enjoy, such as playing video games and scrolling through social media. I can also cook by myself and prepare delicious food for myself at my place.

The phrase 'such like' is incorrect; it should be 'such as'. 'Scolding the social media' is incorrect; it should be 'scrolling through social media'. Also, 'cook a delicious food' should be 'prepare delicious food' or 'cook delicious food'.

× I will cook a delicious food for me at my par umm.

✓ I will cook delicious food for myself at my place.

'Delicious' is an adjective and does not need the article 'a' before 'food' because 'food' is uncountable here. Also, 'for me' is better expressed as 'for myself' to indicate the subject is both the doer and receiver of the action.

× I prefer a legendary holiday because legendary holiday will make me in a stable situation that I work and do something in my style and don't and don't worry, the things I will, the island I will.

✓ I prefer a leisurely holiday because it puts me in a stable situation where I can work and do things in my own style without worrying about anything.

The word 'legendary' is incorrect in this context; the correct adjective is 'leisurely'. The sentence is also fragmented and unclear, requiring restructuring for clarity.

× I prefer a legendary holiday because legendary holiday will make me in a stable situation that I work and do something in my style and don't and don't worry, the things I will, the island I will.

✓ I prefer a leisurely holiday because it allows me to be in a stable situation where I can work and do things my way without worrying about anything.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing. It needs to be restructured to clearly express the idea of preferring a relaxed holiday that reduces stress.

× My preference is a piece for holiday. Then you know it can let me feel stable and I can do anything that that weighs out feeling rushed.

✓ My preference is a peaceful holiday because it helps me feel calm, and I can do anything without feeling rushed.

'Piece for holiday' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'peaceful holiday'. 'Weighs out feeling rushed' is unclear and should be replaced with 'without feeling rushed'.