Holidays— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by avoiding redundancy and making the response more natural. For example, instead of saying 'I went to the USC, I visited USA', you can say 'I went to the USA'. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide more specific details about the places you visited.

Ejemplo: For my last holiday, I visited the USA with my family because my brother lives there. We toured several cities, including New York and San Francisco, and I was thrilled to see the beautiful landmarks and the rapid development of the country.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but can be more natural and concise. Avoid phrases like 'Speaking of holidays' which are unnecessary here. Also, use linking words like 'because' to connect your ideas and provide clearer reasons.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like holidays because they give me a break from the tiring daily tasks. A short vacation helps me to relax and refresh my mind.

Sugerencia: Your answer provides relevant information but can be improved by using clearer sentence structures and linking words. Also, avoid saying 'I like 1' and instead say 'I like one holiday'. Adding a brief explanation of why you like Ganesh Chaturthi would enrich your answer.

Ejemplo: There are many public holidays in my country related to different religions. One of my favourites is Ganesh Chaturthi, an Indian festival where people bring idols of Lord Ganesh into their homes and celebrate with family. I enjoy it because it brings everyone together and creates a joyful atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to use simpler and clearer sentences. Also, avoid phrases like 'under the cloud' which are not natural in English. Use linking words like 'or' and 'sometimes' to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I usually spend holidays with my family. We go to watch movies or do some shopping. Sometimes, if I feel tired, I stay at home and watch popular series or movies that I missed because of work.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but can be more natural by avoiding repetition and improving sentence flow. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons and avoid unnecessary details that do not add much value.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like spending time at home because I can relax and watch whatever I want. Also, I take care of my hair by oiling it, which is easier to do when I'm alone.

Sugerencia: Your answer is a bit confusing and has grammatical errors. Try to structure your answer clearly by stating your preference first, then explaining with examples. Use linking words like 'however' and 'also' to connect ideas logically.

Ejemplo: My preference depends on the place. When I visit my hometown, I like to have a busy holiday because there are many things to do. However, at home, I prefer a leisurely holiday to spend time alone. Also, when I am with my family, I enjoy doing activities together.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows good ideas but is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to express your preference clearly and avoid phrases like 'the busy 1'. Use linking words like 'although' and 'but' to show contrast.

Ejemplo: Although I am an introvert and prefer peaceful holidays, I also enjoy exciting holidays with my family. So, I like both, but if I have to choose, I would prefer a busy holiday with my family.

× For the last vacation, I went to the USC, I visited USA with my family.

✓ For the last vacation, I went to the US, I visited the USA with my family.

The article 'the' is required before 'USA' because it is a country name that uses a definite article. Also, 'USC' seems to be a typo or incorrect abbreviation; it should be 'US' for United States.

× My brother stays in the states so he invited us to have a tour with him.

✓ My brother stays in the States so he invited us to have a tour with him.

'States' as a proper noun referring to the United States should be capitalized. The verb 'stays' is correct here as it refers to a habitual action.

× Most of the holidays I spend it with my family.

✓ Most of the holidays I spend with my family.

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect here because 'I spend' already has a direct object implied; adding 'it' causes redundancy.

× I like to spend time in my home as I can sit back and relax.

✓ I like to spend time at my home as I can sit back and relax.

The preposition 'at' is more appropriate when referring to being at one's home rather than 'in' which implies being inside a building or room.

× If I am having my holiday at native place, I like to have a busily also.

✓ If I am having my holiday at my native place, I like to have a busy one also.

'Busily' is an adverb and incorrect here; the adjective 'busy' should be used to describe the holiday. Also, 'native place' needs a possessive determiner 'my'.

× If I am at my home, I would like it literally as I like to spend time with myself more.

✓ If I am at my home, I would like it literally because I like to spend time by myself more.

The phrase 'with myself' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'by myself' to indicate spending time alone.

× On the other hand, if I am with my family, I like to do things which involves.

✓ On the other hand, if I am with my family, I like to do things which involve us.

The verb 'involves' does not agree with the plural subject 'things'; it should be 'involve'. Also, the sentence is incomplete without specifying who is involved.