Holidays— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer provides interesting facts but lacks natural flow and has some inaccuracies (e.g., 'the Sunderland' instead of 'the Sundarbans'). Try to start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be careful with proper nouns and facts to sound more confident and natural.

Ejemplo: I went to the Sundarbans for my last holiday, which is the world's largest mangrove forest located in the Bagarh and Shakher areas. It covers about 6,000 square kilometers, and its main attraction is the unique Bengal tiger that lives there.

Sugerencia: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear at the end. Try to organize your ideas clearly with a topic sentence, followed by specific reasons, and use linking words to connect your points. Avoid incomplete sentences and clarify your thoughts.

Ejemplo: Yes, I like holidays because they help me relax and reduce stress from work or studying. When I visit new or familiar places during holidays, it refreshes my mind and gives me a break from daily routines.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good ideas but is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your points more clearly and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'get a stance of fruit' and be more specific.

Ejemplo: My favorite public holiday is the summer holiday because during that time, we can enjoy many fresh fruits. Also, the dry weather makes it easy to travel to different places without any problems.

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but starts with a negative phrase which can be confusing. Try to begin with a positive statement and use linking words to connect your activities. Also, avoid redundancy and be more concise.

Ejemplo: On holidays, I usually enjoy the scenic views, try different foods, and spend time hanging out with my friends. These activities help me relax and appreciate the beauty around me.

Sugerencia: Your answer expresses your opinion but has some unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Try to use clearer sentences and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain your reasons logically.

Ejemplo: No, I don't like spending the whole day at home because I prefer going out with my friends. I enjoy seeing new places and experiencing what's happening outside my room.

Sugerencia: Your answer has good points but contains some awkward phrasing and grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your reasons. Avoid vague expressions like 'bonding with one 1% to another.'

Ejemplo: I prefer a busy holiday because I enjoy being around many people. It gives me a chance to share ideas and build strong connections, which I find very rewarding.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear and shows personal growth, but some phrases are awkward or incorrect (e.g., 'most more mandatory'). Try to use more natural expressions and linking words to improve coherence.

Ejemplo: Now, I prefer a peaceful holiday. When I was younger, I enjoyed exciting holidays, but at 24, I value peace more because it helps me relax and recharge.

× I went to the Sunderland.

✓ I went to Sunderland.

The definite article 'the' is not used before proper nouns like place names unless the name includes it (e.g., The Hague). 'Sunderland' is a proper noun and does not require 'the'.

× It's located at the Bagarhide and Shakher area.

✓ It's located in the Bagarhide and Shakher area.

The preposition 'in' is used to indicate location within an area, while 'at' is used for specific points. Since Bagarhide and Shakher is an area, 'in' is correct.

× Its area is about 6000 square kilometer and the main attraction for the Sundarbans is the world's largest and the only one Bengal tiger.

✓ Its area is about 6000 square kilometers and the main attraction of the Sundarbans is the world's largest and only Bengal tiger.

The plural form 'square kilometers' is needed for the measurement. Also, 'only one Bengal tiger' is awkward; 'only Bengal tiger' is more natural. Additionally, 'attraction for' should be 'attraction of' to indicate possession.

× Yes, I like holidays because it relaxed our mind and makes us happy and also when we work or we are at the office or we're at the study, we really need some relaxation to remove our stress.

✓ Yes, I like holidays because they relax our minds and make us happy, and also when we work or are at the office or studying, we really need some relaxation to relieve our stress.

The verbs should be in present tense to match the habitual action. 'It' should be 'they' to refer to 'holidays' (plural). 'Relaxed' and 'makes' are inconsistent; both should be present tense. 'Mind' should be plural 'minds' to agree with plural subject. 'At the study' is incorrect; 'studying' is better. 'Remove our stress' is better expressed as 'relieve our stress'.

× I think the holiday when you go any kinds of unknown places or the known places that time, the differences between the.

✓ I think holidays are different when you go to unknown places or known places.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It lacks a main verb and proper structure. The correction provides a clear, complete sentence conveying the intended meaning.

× I like the most it's a summer holiday because that summer time we can have a lot of fruits, get a stance of fruit and also the great places to move on and the weather is so dry so we can move on places to another without any kinds of problems.

✓ I like summer holidays the most because during summer we can have a lot of fruits, enjoy a variety of fruit, visit great places, and the weather is dry so we can travel to different places without any problems.

'I like the most it's a summer holiday' is awkward; 'I like summer holidays the most' is correct. 'Get a stance of fruit' is unclear; 'enjoy a variety of fruit' is better. 'Move on places to another' is incorrect; 'travel to different places' is correct. 'Any kinds of problems' should be 'any problems'.

× Basically, I didn't do anything, but most of the time what I do, I will say that I enjoy the scenic view, I enjoy the food and I hang out with my friends a lot and it's so much relaxing and beautiful.

✓ Basically, I don't do anything, but most of the time what I do is enjoy the scenic view, enjoy the food, and hang out with my friends a lot; it's very relaxing and beautiful.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses inconsistently. Since the question is about holidays in general, present tense is appropriate. 'Didn't do' should be 'don't do'. 'I will say that I enjoy' is awkward; 'what I do is enjoy' is better. 'So much relaxing' should be 'very relaxing'.

× No, I don't like to spend my day at home because it's I don't like to be imposed at my home.

✓ No, I don't like to spend my day at home because I don't like to be confined at home.

'Imposed at my home' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'confined' or 'stuck'. Also, 'at my home' is better as 'at home' for natural expression.

× I like to hang out and move on with my friends and I want to see the view and also the next year what's going on outside the room.

✓ I like to hang out and go out with my friends, and I want to see the view and also what's going on outside the room next year.

'Move on with my friends' is incorrect; 'go out with my friends' is better. 'The next year what's going on' is awkward; 'what's going on outside the room next year' is clearer.

× I prefer a busy holiday because a busy holiday is always crowded. We can see a lot of people and we can share our ideas and thoughts with a lot of people.

✓ I prefer a busy holiday because it is always crowded. We can see many people and share our ideas and thoughts with them.

'A lot of people' is acceptable but 'many people' is more formal and appropriate here. Repetition of 'a lot of people' is redundant; 'them' is better for the second mention.

× It also a great bondings too.

✓ It is also great bonding.

'It also a great bondings too' is grammatically incorrect. 'Bonding' is uncountable, so 'bondings' is wrong. 'It is also great bonding' is correct.

× Yeah, as a people we need also the humanity and also the bonding with one 1% to another and I enjoy this.

✓ Yeah, as people, we also need humanity and bonding with one another, and I enjoy this.

'As a people' is incorrect; 'as people' is correct. 'The humanity' should be 'humanity' without 'the'. 'Bonding with one 1% to another' is incorrect; 'bonding with one another' is correct.

× Now I prefer a peaceful holiday because when I was a child or in my adult adolescence, I really wanted that exciting holiday.

✓ Now I prefer a peaceful holiday because when I was a child or in my adolescence, I really wanted an exciting holiday.

'Adult adolescence' is incorrect; 'adolescence' alone is sufficient. 'That exciting holiday' should be 'an exciting holiday' for correct article usage.

× But now I've grown up and I'm 24, I really like a peaceful holiday because peace is most more mandatory than the excitement.

✓ But now I've grown up and I'm 24, I really like a peaceful holiday because peace is more important than excitement.

'Most more mandatory' is incorrect and redundant. 'More important' is the correct comparative form. 'The excitement' should be 'excitement' without 'the'.