Holidays— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but a bit lengthy and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and structuring it clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ejemplo: I went to Kedarnath for my last holiday because it is a holy place. My father, who loves worship, planned the trip, and we traveled there by train.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but a bit unclear and wordy. Try to express your ideas more clearly and naturally, using simpler sentences and linking words to explain your reasons effectively.

Ejemplo: Yes, I love holidays because they give me time to relax, travel, and help my parents with their work.

Sugerencia: Your answer is good but can be improved by making it more concise and using linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid unnecessary details and focus on why you like the holiday.

Ejemplo: I like Gandhi Jayanti the best because it celebrates the birth of Mahatma Gandhi, a great freedom fighter, and it is an important and memorable day for everyone.

Sugerencia: Your answer covers different activities but is a bit long and lacks clear structure. Try to start with a topic sentence and then add supporting details using linking words to make your answer coherent and natural.

Ejemplo: On holidays, I usually help my younger brother with his studies. Recently, my father planned a trip, and we all enjoyed it very much.

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, try to use more natural expressions.

Ejemplo: I love spending my whole day at home because I feel comfortable and secure there. On weekends, I prefer staying indoors since I am a homey person.

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and contains some unclear words. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating the same information. Use linking words to explain your situation naturally.

Ejemplo: I prefer busy holidays recently because I am preparing for the IELTS exam on 23rd November. So, I spend my holidays studying seriously and privately.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to express your preference clearly with a topic sentence and support it with reasons using linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and ensure your ideas are fully developed.

Ejemplo: I prefer an exciting holiday because exciting memories last longer. When people think about holidays, they usually remember the fun and adventure.

× So my father planned the trip and we visited the Kedarnath by train.

✓ So my father planned the trip and we visited Kedarnath by train.

The article 'the' before 'Kedarnath' is unnecessary because Kedarnath is a proper noun referring to a specific place. Proper nouns usually do not require 'the'.

× Yes, I do love holidays because during holidays every individual may do their work whatever they want or plan a short trip for at least five days and help their mother or father in their work in holiday.

✓ Yes, I do love holidays because during holidays every individual may do whatever work they want or plan a short trip for at least five days and help their mother or father with their work during the holiday.

The sentence had awkward phrasing and incorrect pronoun usage. 'Whatever they want' should be 'do whatever work they want' for clarity. Also, 'help their mother or father in their work in holiday' should be 'help their mother or father with their work during the holiday' to use correct prepositions and article usage.

× The public holiday I love the best is Gandhi Jayanti as Gandhi Ji is a freedom fighter, was born on 2nd October and it is the public holiday by the authorities whereas it is a memorable day for everyone.

✓ The public holiday I love the best is Gandhi Jayanti as Gandhi Ji was a freedom fighter, was born on 2nd October, and it is a public holiday declared by the authorities; moreover, it is a memorable day for everyone.

The phrase 'public holiday by the authorities' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'public holiday declared by the authorities' to correctly express the meaning. Also, 'Gandhi Ji is a freedom fighter' should be 'was a freedom fighter' because he is no longer alive.

× I do several things on my holidays whereas my father recently planned a trip and we all very delighted with that trip and I always help my younger brother in his study as well as help him in his assignments also.

✓ I do several things on my holidays. Recently, my father planned a trip and we were all very delighted with it. I always help my younger brother with his studies as well as his assignments.

The use of 'whereas' is incorrect here as it implies contrast, but the sentence is listing activities. It is better to separate into clear sentences. Also, 'we all very delighted' lacks a verb and should be 'we were all very delighted'. Prepositions like 'help him in his study' should be 'help him with his studies'.

× There is no doubt that I love to spend my whole day at my home.

✓ There is no doubt that I love to spend my whole day at home.

The phrase 'at my home' is less natural than 'at home' when referring to one's own residence. 'At home' is the correct idiomatic expression.

× I feel very comfortable, secure as well as delighted whenever I am I am in the home.

✓ I feel very comfortable, secure, and delighted whenever I am at home.

The sentence repeats 'I am' unnecessarily and uses 'in the home' which is unnatural. The correct phrase is 'at home'. Also, 'comfortable, secure as well as delighted' should be connected with commas and 'and' for proper listing.

× Whereas after few days like weekends, I don't prefer to go outside because I am a homey person.

✓ After a few days, like on weekends, I don't prefer to go outside because I am a homey person.

Starting the sentence with 'Whereas' is incorrect here as it implies contrast without a preceding clause. Also, 'after few days' should be 'after a few days' and 'like weekends' should be 'like on weekends' for correct preposition usage.

× Recently, due to my hectic schedule, the holidays are quite busy because I am preparing for IELTS examination and my paper will be on 23rd November.

✓ Recently, due to my hectic schedule, my holidays have been quite busy because I am preparing for the IELTS examination and my exam will be on 23rd November.

'The holidays are quite busy' is better expressed as 'my holidays have been quite busy' to indicate recent ongoing activity. Also, 'my paper' is better replaced with 'my exam' for clarity. 'IELTS examination' should have the definite article 'the'.

× So my holidays are quite busy and I'm studying very purposefully and privately without any lessering.

✓ So my holidays are quite busy and I'm studying very purposefully and privately without any leisure.

The word 'lessering' is incorrect and likely a misspelling or misuse. The correct word is 'leisure', meaning free time. The sentence means the student is studying without leisure time.

× I would prefer an exciting holiday rather than a peaceful holiday because an exciting holiday memories will be kept future leave because if someone thought that the holidays then they will remember the excitement as.

✓ I would prefer an exciting holiday rather than a peaceful holiday because exciting holiday memories will be kept for the future. If someone thinks about the holidays, they will remember the excitement.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It has incorrect tense usage and awkward phrasing. The correction restructures the sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness, using proper tense and sentence completion.