Holidays— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatical: begin with a clear topic sentence stating where you went, then add one or two specific details (what you did and how you felt). Avoid repetition and filler words. Use correct sentence structure and simple linking words (for example, "We visited...", "I enjoyed...").

Ejemplo: I spent my last holiday in Hanoi, the capital city of my country. During the trip, my family and I visited several museums and famous tourist attractions, such as the Hoa Lo Prison and the Old Quarter. I really enjoyed exploring the city's architecture and trying local food, so it was a memorable holiday.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and follow with specific reasons and a linking word. Avoid confusing phrases and repetition. For example, state which type of holidays you prefer and explain why with concrete details (activities, people, feelings).

Ejemplo: Yes, I really like holidays, especially summer holidays, because they give me time to relax with family and friends. For instance, we usually travel to another city together, visit local attractions, and spend long evenings catching up, which makes the time very memorable.

Sugerencia: Be specific: name the holiday (if possible) and explain two clear reasons using linking words (for example, "because" and "so"). Keep sentences short and avoid vague terms like "the third holiday."

Ejemplo: My favourite public holiday is Tet (Lunar New Year) because it allows me to spend several days with family and take part in traditional activities. Because schools and offices close, I can relax, visit relatives, and enjoy special meals, so it feels very special to me.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence and provide specific examples and a linking phrase showing reason. Correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., "lie down", "surf the internet", "recharge my batteries"). Limit to two to three sentences.

Ejemplo: On holidays I usually prefer low-energy activities to relax. For example, I often lie down, surf the internet, and scroll TikTok to unwind and recharge my batteries after a busy work or study period.

Sugerencia: Be clear and grammatical: state your preference, then give two specific reasons with linking words ("because", "so"). Avoid unclear phrases. Explain what activities you do at home and why they help you.

Ejemplo: Yes, I prefer spending my free time at home because I only have a little time to relax after work and study. At home I can chat with family, watch films, and rest, which helps me feel refreshed before returning to work.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid awkward phrasing. Use one clear reason and a brief example. Correct collocations ("leisurely holiday", "recharge my batteries"). Keep to two sentences maximum.

Ejemplo: I prefer a leisurely holiday because I usually want to rest and recharge my batteries after busy periods. For example, I enjoy slow mornings, light walks, and relaxing with friends rather than a packed itinerary.

Sugerencia: Be concise: state your preference in the first sentence and support it with one or two specific reasons and an example. Use correct vocabulary ("recharge my batteries") and avoid repetition. Limit to three sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer a peaceful holiday, especially when I can spend time with close friends and family. For instance, staying at home and having quiet meals together helps me relax and recharge my batteries after a stressful term.

× Oh, well, today I'm gonna talk about my last holiday.

✓ Oh, well, today I'm going to talk about my last holiday.

Use of informal contraction 'gonna' is not standard in formal speaking tests. Replace with 'going to' to form the present continuous with future meaning. Ensure consistency with present-tense reporting.

× I went to the capital of my country is Hanoi city.

✓ I went to the capital of my country, Hanoi.

The original mixes two sentence structures: a past statement 'I went to the capital...' and a present identification 'is Hanoi city.' Combine them into a single clear past statement and appositive: 'the capital of my country, Hanoi.' Remove redundant word 'city.'

× Uh, it was a such big city and also the gorgeous city.

✓ It was such a big and beautiful city.

Word order and article use are incorrect: 'a such big' should be 'such a big' or better 'a big and beautiful city.' 'Gorgeous' is acceptable but 'beautiful' is more natural here. Combine adjectives correctly.

× Uh, it's also more than I am a family went to a lot of museums and also tourist attractions, tourism attractions and have a lot of the over the moon moments in that.

✓ Also, my family and I visited a lot of museums and tourist attractions, and we had many wonderful moments.

The original has incorrect word order, pronoun placement, and awkward phrases ('more than I am a family', 'tourism attractions', 'over the moon moments'). Use 'my family and I' as subject, correct verb forms 'visited' and 'had', and replace informal idioms with 'wonderful moments.'

× I do like holidays, especially unlike that holiday in also summer holiday because in that holiday I can have enough time for my family and and friends in that time.

✓ I do like holidays, especially summer holidays, because I can spend enough time with my family and friends then.

Remove 'unlike' which is incorrect here. Use plural 'summer holidays' or 'the summer holiday.' Change 'have enough time for my family and friends in that time' to 'spend enough time with my family and friends then.' Maintain present simple for habits.

× My families always go to another city to have a a trip after studying, working.

✓ My family always goes to another city for a trip after studying and working.

Use singular collective noun 'family' with singular verb 'goes' (subject-verb agreement). Remove duplicate 'a', and use 'for a trip' or 'on a trip.' Also combine 'studying and working.'

× I think it's really memorable.

✓ I think it's really memorable.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. (Kept to show only listed errors are corrected.)

× Uh, I like the third holiday best because in that holiday I can do a lot of activities with my friends and family and also I have enough time for them.

✓ I like the third holiday best because I can do many activities with my friends and family and have enough time for them.

Replace 'a lot of' with 'many' (both acceptable) and remove repetitive 'in that holiday.' Use present simple for habitual preference.

× I usually use that time to unwind and relax after working and and studying.

✓ I usually use that time to unwind and relax after working and studying.

Duplicate 'and' removed. Maintain parallel gerund forms 'working and studying.'

× I think that is my best holiday of.

✓ I think that is my best holiday.

Remove the stray preposition 'of' which makes the sentence incomplete. The corrected sentence is complete and natural.

× In my holiday I usually do some low energy activities such as laying down on my bed and surfing the Internet, also scrolling the TikTok because in that day I just want to unwind and recharge my battery after studying and working hard.

✓ During my holidays I usually do low-energy activities such as lying on my bed, surfing the Internet, or scrolling TikTok because on those days I just want to unwind and recharge my batteries after studying and working hard.

Use 'during my holidays' or 'on my holiday' for time expression. 'Laying down' should be 'lying' (verb form). Hyphenate 'low-energy' as a compound adjective. 'The TikTok' is incorrect; use 'TikTok' without an article. Use plural 'batteries' idiomatically. Maintain plural/singular consistency for time expressions.

× Definitely yes because I just have a few of time to unwind after studying and working.

✓ Definitely yes, because I only have a little time to unwind after studying and working.

'a few of time' is incorrect. Use 'a little time' for uncountable 'time' or 'a few days' for countable. Also 'only' is more natural than 'just' here.

× So I just want to spend my time, my free time in at home with my family and friends.

✓ So I just want to spend my free time at home with my family and friends.

Use 'at home' not 'in at home.' Remove redundant 'my time, my free time.' Keep concise phrasing.

× I just like that because I think that activities and also my favorite people helps me on why.

✓ I like that because I think those activities and my favorite people help me relax.

Original is unclear and ungrammatical. Replace 'that activities' with 'those activities' and ensure subject-verb agreement 'people help.' Clarify meaning to 'help me relax.'

× I prefer a leisurely holiday because I just like a people would like to unwind after studying and working hard.

✓ I prefer a leisurely holiday because I think people would like to unwind after studying and working hard.

Remove extra article 'a' before 'people' and change 'I just like a people would like' to 'I think people would like.' Use consistent present-tense opinion language.

× So I think that is my present for myself to recharge my battery batteries.

✓ So I think it is a present to myself to recharge my batteries.

'Present for myself' is awkward; 'a present to myself' is natural. Remove duplicated 'battery batteries' and use plural 'batteries.'

× So I think it's fine if I use all my holiday for laterally.

✓ So I think it's fine if I spend my whole holiday relaxing.

'Laterally' is incorrect (wrong word). Use 'relaxing' or 'at leisure.' Also 'use all my holiday' is awkward; 'spend my whole holiday' is natural.

× Oh, I just like to have a peaceful holiday especially with all my close friend and family because I just want to do some activities with my favorite people and also I just want to stay at home and relax and also rejoin my batteries after studying working hard.

✓ Oh, I just like to have a peaceful holiday especially with my close friends and family because I want to do activities with my favorite people, stay at home, relax, and recharge my batteries after working and studying hard.

Use plural 'friends' to match 'all my close friend' and maintain parallel verbs 'stay,' 'relax,' 'recharge.' 'Rejoin my batteries' is incorrect; use 'recharge my batteries.' Ensure consistent word order 'working and studying' or 'studying and working.'