Holidays— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and ungrammatical. Give a direct topic sentence saying where you went, then one or two specific details (who you went with, what you did). Keep it concise and coherent using simple linking words (for example, "with" or "because").

Ejemplo: I went to Bali on my last holiday with my family. We stayed at a beach resort and spent most days swimming and visiting local temples.

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but a bit abrupt. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one specific reason with a linking word such as "because" or "because of". Avoid single-word replies like "Sports."

Ejemplo: Yes, I like holidays because they give me time to relax and be with my family. For example, we often play sports and have long breakfasts together.

Sugerencia: The response is vague and doesn't name a specific public holiday. State the holiday you like and give one or two reasons why, using linking words such as "because" or "so." Be specific about traditions or activities.

Ejemplo: My favorite public holiday is Lunar New Year because I visit relatives and we share special meals. During the holiday we exchange gifts and watch traditional performances.

Sugerencia: Your answer communicates the main idea but is repetitive and grammatically awkward. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific example of an activity and explain briefly why, using a linking phrase like "for example" or "because."

Ejemplo: On holidays I like to travel to other countries because I enjoy trying local food. For example, I tried street food in Thailand and loved the variety of flavors.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but contains word choice errors ("for a call"). Give a clear statement and one specific activity you prefer, using correct collocations like "have breakfast" or "have coffee."

Ejemplo: No, I prefer to go out to have breakfast or coffee at a cafe. I enjoy sitting outside and watching the city wake up.

Sugerencia: Good clear preference and examples, but reduce filler words ("uh") and be slightly more specific about frequency or reasons. Use a linking phrase such as "because" to explain why you prefer busy holidays.

Ejemplo: I prefer a busy holiday because I enjoy trying new activities. For instance, I like hiking, zip-lining and occasionally extreme sports like bungee jumping.

Sugerencia: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors ("an exciting holidays"). Provide a direct topic sentence, correct grammar, and one reason using a linking word like "because."

Ejemplo: I prefer an exciting holiday because I get bored easily and like to explore new places and activities.

× That's how the daily I thought about the the children with my family and we was your mother to travel.

✓ I spent my last holiday with my family and we took the children to visit my mother.

Original sentence has multiple structural issues: wrong word order ('That's how the daily'), repeated word 'the', incorrect verb form 'was', and unclear subject-object relationships. I reconstructed the sentence to fit the question about where the student went on holiday. Use 'spent' for time, 'with my family' to show accompaniment, and 'took the children to visit my mother' to convey travel purpose. Suggestion: plan sentences with a clear subject + past-tense verb + object and avoid unnecessary filler words.

× Sports. I like holidays. It's time with family and away from work.

✓ Yes, I like holidays because they are a time to be with family and to get away from work.

Fragment 'Sports.' is unrelated and the following sentences are choppy. Also 'It's time with family and away from work' lacks parallel structure. Correction combines ideas into one coherent sentence, uses plural 'they' to refer to holidays, and maintains present-tense general statement. Suggestion: connect related ideas with conjunctions and use parallel infinitive phrases ('to be', 'to get') for clarity.

× So today is a start to see our relatives and enjoy.

✓ On public holidays we usually start by visiting our relatives and enjoying time together.

Original uses 'So today is a start' which is awkward and unclear for a general preference. I changed it to a general statement about what the student does on public holidays, using present simple to express routine. Suggestion: use clear temporal phrases ('On public holidays') and complete verb phrases ('start by visiting').

× On the holidays, I prefer to travel to different countries and I like food, so that's why I prefer to travel a different type of food.

✓ On holidays, I prefer to travel to different countries because I like trying different kinds of food.

'On the holidays' is unnatural—use 'On holidays' or 'During holidays'. The phrase 'prefer to travel a different type of food' is ungrammatical; 'try different kinds of food' correctly expresses the idea. Also removed redundant 'so that's why'. Suggestion: use 'try' with 'different kinds/types of food' and avoid redundant conjunctions.

× Actually, I prefer to go outside for a call to have breakfast or coffee.

✓ Actually, I prefer to go out to have breakfast or coffee.

'Go outside for a call' is incorrect and likely meant 'go out for a coffee' or 'go out to have breakfast'. Use 'go out' rather than 'go outside' in this context, and use the infinitive 'to have' for purpose. Suggestion: use common collocations 'go out for coffee' or 'go out to have breakfast'.

× I prefer a busy holiday with activities and lots of things to do like uh, skydiving, bungee jumping and other stuff.

✓ I prefer a busy holiday with lots of activities to do, such as skydiving, bungee jumping, and other adventurous activities.

The original has filler 'uh' and vague 'stuff'. Improved sentence removes fillers, uses 'such as' for examples, and replaces vague 'stuff' with 'adventurous activities' for clarity. Suggestion: avoid fillers and use specific nouns instead of 'stuff'.

× I am more into an exciting holidays as I feel bored if I go for a peaceful holiday.

✓ I am more into exciting holidays because I feel bored if I have a peaceful holiday.

Original mixes singular article 'an' with plural 'holidays' which is incorrect. Corrected to 'exciting holidays' (plural) and used 'because' for clearer reasoning. Also changed 'go for' to 'have' for more natural phrasing. Suggestion: match article and noun number (a/an + singular; no article or 'the' with plural when generalizing).