Plants— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'one of my hobby' 대신 'one of my hobbies'를 사용해야 하며, 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다. 또한, 중복된 표현('keep plants')을 피하고, 더 구체적인 설명을 추가하면 좋습니다.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy keeping plants at home. However, when I was a child, I couldn't have any because our house was too small.

Sugerencia: 답변이 이해하기 어렵고 문법 및 어휘 사용에 오류가 많습니다. 'on my phone'은 아마 'in my home'을 의미하는 것 같으며, 'glow' 대신 'bloom' 또는 'grow'를 사용해야 합니다. 또한, 'eat seas'는 의미가 불분명하므로 명확한 표현으로 바꾸어야 합니다.

Ejemplo: I remember planting sunflowers in my home garden. After they bloomed, I enjoyed eating the seeds.

Sugerencia: 답변에 오타('planet' 대신 'plant')와 중복된 단어('but but')가 있습니다. 또한, 질문에 직접적으로 답변하지 않고 주제가 벗어났습니다. 질문에 맞게 식물 재배에 관한 간단한 지식을 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ejemplo: Not much, but I know that plants need sunlight and water to grow well.

Sugerencia: 답변이 불확실하고 문법적으로 부자연스럽습니다. 'dads'는 아마 'that'을 의미하는 것 같으며, 문장을 명확하고 자연스럽게 고쳐야 합니다. 또한, 식물과 꽃을 구분하여 구체적으로 설명하는 것이 좋습니다.

Ejemplo: I'm not sure about all Chinese people, but I think couples often give flowers to each other as a symbol of love.

× Sure, keeping plants is one of my hobby, but when I was little I didn't keep plants at home because my house is too small to keep plants.

✓ Sure, keeping plants is one of my hobbies, but when I was little I didn't keep plants at home because my house was too small to keep plants.

The word 'hobby' should be plural 'hobbies' because it refers to one of multiple hobbies. Also, 'is' is correct here because 'keeping plants' is singular as a gerund phrase. Additionally, 'is' in 'my house is too small' should be 'was' to match the past tense context of 'when I was little'.

× In my memory I planted sunflower on my phone. After it glow it grows. I enjoyed to eat seas.

✓ In my memory, I planted a sunflower on my phone. After it grew, it grew. I enjoyed eating seeds.

The verb 'glow' should be in past tense 'grew' to match the past context. 'Enjoyed to eat' is incorrect; the correct form is 'enjoyed eating'. 'Seas' is likely a typo for 'seeds'. Also, 'a sunflower' requires the indefinite article 'a'.

× In my memory I planted sunflower on my phone.

✓ In my memory, I planted a sunflower in my pot.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; 'in' is the correct preposition for planting something inside a container like a pot. Also, 'phone' is likely a typo for 'pot'.

× After it glow it grows.

✓ After it grew, it grew.

The sentence is unclear and repetitive. The verb 'glow' is incorrect; it should be 'grew'. The pronoun 'it' is used correctly but the sentence structure is confusing and should be clarified.

× I enjoyed to eat seas.

✓ I enjoyed eating seeds.

The phrase 'enjoyed to eat' is incorrect; the verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund ('eating'). 'Seas' is a typo and should be 'seeds'.

× Hmm, not really. Umm, growing a planet out of my interest but but instead I know how to train dogs.

✓ Hmm, not really. Umm, growing plants is not my interest, but instead I know how to train dogs.

The phrase 'growing a planet out of my interest' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'growing plants is not my interest'. The repeated 'but' is an error. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity.

× I'm not sure about dads, I guess couple will give flowers to each other to show their love.

✓ I'm not sure about that, but I guess couples will give flowers to each other to show their love.

The word 'dads' is incorrect in this context; likely the speaker meant 'that'. 'Couple' should be plural 'couples' to match the general statement. Also, a conjunction 'but' is added for better sentence flow.