Gifts— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'prepared some gifts before I giving'. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn, ví dụ sử dụng thì hiện tại hoàn thành hoặc hiện tại đơn phù hợp. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh dài dòng không cần thiết.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think I'm good at giving gifts because I usually prepare them in advance and write a heartfelt letter to express my feelings.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ 'often'. Ngoài ra, hãy nói rõ hơn về các dịp đặc biệt và món quà bạn chọn để câu trả lời cụ thể hơn.

Ejemplo: I usually give gifts on special occasions such as birthdays or Valentine's Day, and I often choose cakes or perfumes as presents.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên tránh dùng từ 'consider about' mà chỉ dùng 'consider'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn về việc bạn cân nhắc ngân sách và loại quà phù hợp.

Ejemplo: When choosing a gift, I consider whether it is special and fits my budget, so I usually avoid expensive items like jewelry or phones if they are unreasonable for me.

Sugerencia: Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đơn cho hành động đã hoàn thành và diễn đạt câu rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ và nói thêm chi tiết để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. Recently, I made a cookie cake after finding a recipe online, and it was a handmade gift for a friend.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn tại sao quà tự làm lại có ý nghĩa hơn quà đắt tiền.

Ejemplo: No, I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better. In my opinion, handmade gifts are more meaningful because they show the effort and care I put into making them.

× Oh well, I'm quite good in giving gifts because I'm always prepared some gifts before I giving it to someone and I also write down the letter to present my emotion.

✓ Oh well, I'm quite good at giving gifts because I always prepare some gifts before I give them to someone and I also write a letter to express my feelings.

The phrase 'good in' should be 'good at' to correctly express skill. 'I'm always prepared some gifts' is incorrect; it should be 'I always prepare some gifts' to use the correct verb form. 'Before I giving it' should be 'before I give them' to use the base verb form after 'before' and to match plural 'gifts'. 'Write down the letter to present my emotion' is better as 'write a letter to express my feelings' for natural English usage.

× While I often give gifts to others when they have a special occasion like birthday or Valentine, and I often give a cake or a perfume.

✓ I often give gifts to others when they have a special occasion like a birthday or Valentine's Day, and I often give a cake or perfume.

The word 'While' at the beginning is unnecessary and confusing here. 'Like birthday or Valentine' should be 'like a birthday or Valentine's Day' to include articles and correct noun forms. 'A perfume' is better as just 'perfume' since perfume is uncountable in this context.

× I always consider about special gifts like jewelry or expensive present like phone or something and unreasonable for my budget.

✓ I always consider special gifts like jewelry or expensive presents like phones or something, but they are unreasonable for my budget.

'Consider' does not require the preposition 'about'. 'Expensive present' should be plural 'expensive presents' to match 'gifts'. 'Like phone or something' is vague; 'like phones or something' is better. Added 'but they are' to connect the idea that these gifts are unreasonable for the budget.

× Yes, of course. Recently I have made a small cake which is a cookie, a cookie cake and I just find out the recipe of this.

✓ Yes, of course. Recently I made a small cake which is a cookie cake, and I just found out the recipe for it.

'I have made' is acceptable but 'I made' fits better with 'recently' in spoken English. 'I just find out' should be past tense 'I just found out'. 'Recipe of this' should be 'recipe for it' for correct preposition use.

× Oh, I think no. In my opinion, the handmade gift is better to express the meaningful present because it's when when I make a handmade items like cake and this is.

✓ Oh, I don't think so. In my opinion, handmade gifts better express meaningful feelings because I put effort into making handmade items like cakes.

'I think no' is incorrect; 'I don't think so' is the correct expression. 'The handmade gift is better to express the meaningful present' is awkward; rephrased to 'handmade gifts better express meaningful feelings'. The phrase 'because it's when when I make a handmade items like cake and this is' is unclear and ungrammatical; rephrased for clarity and grammar.