Gifts— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Говорите более уверенно и стуктурированно: дайте краткий прямой ответ, затем объясните причину и добавьте пример. Избегайте повторов («I have never been, I have never been gifted») и междометий (uh). Используйте простые связки для логического перехода.

Ejemplo: No, I'm not very good at giving gifts. I think this is because I rarely received presents as a child, so I never learned what people like. For example, when I try to choose a present now, I often feel unsure if it will be appreciated.

Sugerencia: Отвечайте прямо и корректно формулируйте причины. Уберите лишние слова и местоименные ошибки («her», «to others»). Используйте связки (for example, because, usually) и один-два конкретных примера событий.

Ejemplo: I usually give gifts on special occasions, such as birthdays or holidays, because I feel it's more meaningful. For example, I always buy something for my friend's birthday and for New Year celebrations.

Sugerencia: Сформулируйте предложение более естественно и без повторов («for for»). Уточните критерии: полезность, интересы, бюджет. Добавьте связки (first, also, because) и конкретный пример, чтобы показать практическое мышление.

Ejemplo: I usually ask the person for a wish list first, because that helps me choose something they will actually use. I also consider their hobbies and my budget; for instance, for a friend who likes cooking I might buy a good kitchen gadget.

Sugerencia: Дайте более точный и связный ответ: укажите время и кратко опишите подарок. Избегайте лишних звуков и неструктурированных фраз. Используйте связку для перехода к описанию (for example, I made…).

Ejemplo: Yes, I did when I was a child. For example, I made a practical handmade card and a small knitted scarf for my mother, which she still keeps.

Sugerencia: Формулируйте позицию ясно и обоснуйте её с примерами. Избегайте частых «umm» и повторов. Используйте связки (because, therefore, for example) и приведите конкретный пример практичного подарка, объясняя почему он выражает чувства.

Ejemplo: No, I don't think expensive gifts show feelings better, because thought and relevance matter more than price. For example, I prefer to give a handmade photo album or a useful item that reminds the person of shared memories.

× Not at all, since my childhood I have never been, I have never been gifted by a gift.

✓ Not at all. Since my childhood I have never received a gift.

The original sentence has awkward structure and redundant phrases ('have never been gifted by a gift' is incorrect and wordy). Use the correct verb 'receive' with a direct object 'a gift' and separate into two sentences for clarity. Also remove duplicated 'I have never been'. Совет: используйте 'receive a gift' вместо пассивной и неправильно сформулированной конструкции.

× Uh, that is why doing today I can't give a gift properly.

✓ That is why today I can't give a gift properly.

The phrase 'doing today' is incorrect. Use adverb 'today' in the correct position; no present participle is required. Keep simple present/modal structure 'can't give'. Совет: разместите 'today' рядом с глаголом или предикатом, не используйте лишний '-ing'.

× I always give her some gifts to others purely on umm, some events because I see no point to give a gift on the usual day.

✓ I only give people gifts on special occasions because I don't see the point of giving a gift on an ordinary day.

Original mixes pronouns ('her', 'others') and has incorrect preposition and article usage ('on the usual day'). Use a clear subject 'people' or 'others', 'only' to express exclusivity, and 'special occasions' for natural phrasing. Use 'point of doing something'. Совет: определите, кому вы даёте подарки ('people' или 'her') и избегайте одновременного использования разных местоимений.

× Before choosing a gift, I always ask for for the person for their wish list in order to give the gift that they would use and while using it would recall ma me.

✓ Before choosing a gift, I always ask the person for their wish list so I can give something they will use and that will remind them of me.

Original repeats 'for', misorders parts, and contains 'recall ma me' which is ungrammatical. Use 'ask the person for their wish list', 'so I can give', and relative clause 'that will remind them of me'. Совет: избегайте дублирования слов и проверьте порядок слов в цельной фразе.

× Yes, when I was a child, I always gave my mom, uh, a practical, A handmade gift.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I often gave my mom practical handmade gifts.

Mixes singular/plural and punctuation. With 'always' and past time 'when I was a child' better to say 'often' or 'used to'; use plural 'gifts' or rephrase singular without comma. Remove unnecessary article and comma. Совет: согласуйте число существительного с контекстом и используйте подходящее частотное наречие ('often', 'used to').

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

✓ Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

The question sentence is grammatical as a prompt; no correction needed. It correctly uses comparative 'better' with plural subject 'gifts'. Совет: нет изменений.

× The reason for that is umm, when I buy expensive gifts, it umm, doesn't represent my feelings to the person.

✓ The reason is that when I buy expensive gifts, they don't represent my feelings to the person.

Pronoun agreement error: 'it' should be 'they' to agree with plural 'gifts'. Also simplify 'the reason for that is' to 'the reason is that'. Maintain present tense for habitual action. Совет: следите за согласованием местоимений с существительными по числу.

× That is why I give my preference to some, uh, to practical ones.

✓ That is why I prefer to give practical gifts.

Awkward phrasing 'give my preference to ... to practical ones' is incorrect. Use the verb 'prefer' and noun 'gifts' for clarity and natural word order. Совет: используйте простые глагольные конструкции ('I prefer') вместо сложных фраз с 'preference'.