Money— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors like "help each others."

Ejemplo: Yes, I have borrowed money before because, as a student, I don't have a salary. Usually, I borrow from my parents since they are willing to support me financially.

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and a bit confusing. Make sure to respond directly and clearly. Use linking words to explain your point and avoid repetition or hesitation.

Ejemplo: No, I have never lent money to others. However, I sometimes give money to my siblings as gifts instead of lending it to them.

× They both help each others so that they could give me money.

✓ They both help each other so that they can give me money.

The phrase 'each others' is incorrect because 'each other' is used to refer to a reciprocal action between two people. 'Each others' is not a valid form. Also, 'could' is changed to 'can' to better express present ability.

× I sometimes do give my siblings as a gift but not really lends them.

✓ I sometimes do give money to my siblings as a gift but don't really lend to them.

The original sentence is missing the object after 'give' and misuses 'lends' which should be 'lend' to agree with the subject 'I'. Also, 'give my siblings as a gift' is incomplete; it should specify what is given, e.g., 'give money to my siblings.'

× Lend to them, yeah.

✓ I lend to them, yeah.

The sentence lacks a subject. Adding 'I' clarifies who is performing the action, making the sentence grammatically correct.