Money— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer needs to be more natural and grammatically correct. Try to use clear sentence structures and avoid redundancy. Also, provide specific supporting details with linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, start with a direct response, then explain the situation and the result logically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have borrowed money from others, especially during difficult times. For instance, when I was a college student, I didn't have enough money to pay my tuition fees, so I borrowed some from a close friend. This experience taught me to be more self-reliant and manage my finances carefully.

Sugerencia: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer sentence structures. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have lent money to others, especially when they are in urgent need. I believe that lending money based on trust strengthens relationships and can be very helpful during emergencies. For example, I once lent money to a friend who needed it for medical expenses.

× Yes, am I borrowed money from others specially when I need.

✓ Yes, I borrowed money from others especially when I needed.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'am I borrowed' which is not a correct past tense form. The correct past tense of 'borrow' is 'borrowed'. Also, 'specially' should be 'especially' and 'need' should be in past tense 'needed' to match the past context.

× I don't have money to pay the tuition so I borrowed money from other.

✓ I didn't have money to pay the tuition so I borrowed money from others.

The sentence uses 'don't have' which is present tense, but the context is past, so it should be 'didn't have'. Also, 'other' should be plural 'others' when referring to people.

× It's a crucial situation but through but we threw that it makes me have the self-reliant and independence to survive.

✓ It was a crucial situation, but I thought that it made me become self-reliant and independent to survive.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'through but we threw' is incorrect and unclear; 'makes me have the self-reliant and independence' is grammatically incorrect. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects verb tenses and word forms.

× Yes, I have lent money to others especially if they need.

✓ Yes, I have lent money to others especially if they need it.

The sentence is missing the object 'it' after 'need'. Adding 'it' clarifies the meaning and corrects the modal verb usage.

× I believe that lending money from others as long as you have trust can help it in consenting relationship and also it helps for the emergency procedures of others.

✓ I believe that lending money to others, as long as you have trust, can help in a consenting relationship and also helps in emergency situations for others.

The phrase 'lending money from others' is incorrect; it should be 'lending money to others'. Also, 'help it in consenting relationship' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'help in a consenting relationship'. 'Helps for the emergency procedures' is better expressed as 'helps in emergency situations'. Prepositions are corrected to fit standard English usage.