Money— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現が見られます。例えば、「I haven't to borrow money」ではなく「I haven't borrowed money」が正しいです。また、理由を述べる際に接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより自然になります。具体的な例や詳細を加えると説得力が増します。

Ejemplo: No, I haven't borrowed money from others because my parents taught me that borrowing money can cause problems between people. For example, it might lead to misunderstandings or conflicts, so I prefer to avoid it.

Sugerencia: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多いです。例えば、「money can be caused some some conflict」ではなく「money can cause conflicts」が正しいです。また、「rent or borrow money from and to others」という表現は混乱を招きます。接続詞を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることが重要です。

Ejemplo: No, I haven't lent money to others because my parents advised me that lending money can cause conflicts. Therefore, I think it's better to avoid lending or borrowing money to maintain good relationships.

× No, I haven't to borrow money from adults because my parents taught me not to borrow money from others and also not to lend money to others it's because money is a factor which caused the issues between the people so I.

✓ No, I haven't borrowed money from adults because my parents taught me not to borrow money from others and also not to lend money to others. It's because money is a factor which causes issues between people.

The phrase 'I haven't to borrow' is incorrect because 'have to' is a modal verb phrase and does not combine with 'haven't' in this way. The correct form is 'I haven't borrowed' to indicate past experience. Also, 'caused' should be 'causes' to agree with the present tense context. Additionally, the sentence is long and run-on; it should be split for clarity.

× No I haven't. My parents also told me not to do so. It's because money can be caused some some conflict between people and it is better to avoid rent or borrow money from and to others.

✓ No, I haven't. My parents also told me not to do so. It's because money can cause some conflict between people and it is better to avoid renting or borrowing money from and to others.

The phrase 'money can be caused some some conflict' is incorrect; 'can cause' is the correct form because 'cause' is an active verb here. Also, 'rent or borrow' should be 'renting or borrowing' to use the gerund form after 'avoid'. The repetition of 'some' is a mistake and should be removed.