Money— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Try to avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide more specific details about the situation. For example, mention how often you borrow money or why you choose your sister specifically.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have borrowed money from others, mainly from my sister. Since I am currently not earning, I often ask her for financial help. For instance, whenever I need money for daily expenses, I either call her or visit her to borrow some. She is my preferred person because she understands my situation well.

Sugerencia: Avoid repeating words and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Provide clearer reasons and expand slightly on how you manage your money to make your answer more informative and natural.

Ejemplo: No, I have never lent money to others because I currently have no source of income. Therefore, I prefer to keep my money for myself and use it wisely, especially to support my work and daily needs.

× Yes I definitely borrow money from others.

✓ Yes, I definitely borrow money from others.

A comma is needed after 'Yes' to separate the introductory word from the main clause, improving sentence clarity and correctness.

× I usually usually bother money from my sister because I I'm not earning right now and my sister is earning so whenever I need money I I I call her.

✓ I usually borrow money from my sister because I'm not earning right now and my sister is earning, so whenever I need money, I call her.

The word 'bother' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'borrow' when taking money temporarily. Also, repeated words like 'usually' and 'I' should be removed for clarity. Commas are added to separate clauses properly.

× Sometime I even just go to her and ask for the money.

✓ Sometimes I even just go to her and ask for the money.

'Sometime' is an adverb meaning 'at some unspecified time' but here 'Sometimes' (meaning 'occasionally') is correct. This improves the sentence's meaning and grammatical correctness.

× Definitely not because I am not earning earning.

✓ Definitely not because I am not earning.

The word 'earning' is repeated unnecessarily. Removing the duplicate improves sentence clarity and correctness.

× I don't have any source of income so I'd never lend money to others.

✓ I don't have any source of income, so I would never lend money to others.

A comma is needed before 'so' to separate independent clauses. Also, 'I'd' (I would) is better expanded for clarity. This improves sentence structure and readability.

× Others I prefer to keep my money to myself and use wisely for my work.

✓ I prefer to keep my money to myself and use it wisely for my work.

The word 'Others' at the beginning is unnecessary and confusing. Also, 'use wisely' needs an object 'it' to clarify what is being used. Correct pronoun usage improves sentence clarity.