Money— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 你的回答表达了主要意思，但句子结构不够清晰，存在语法错误和表达重复。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have borrowed money from my family recently because I prefer not to borrow from friends, as it might affect our relationship. Family members usually understand and support each other more closely.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子重复且逻辑不够连贯。建议使用更简洁的句子，明确表达原因，并使用连接词提高流畅度。

Ejemplo: No, I have never lent money to others because I am currently a university student and do not have a stable income. I rely on my parents for financial support.

× Yes, I have just borrowed money from my family because I don't want to borrow from my friends which could make a difference change between our relationship but for family we are take care of more closely.

✓ Yes, I have just borrowed money from my family because I don't want to borrow from my friends as it could change our relationship, but with family, we take care of each other more closely.

句中使用了不恰当的连接词“which”，应使用“as”表示原因。同时，句子结构混乱，需调整使表达更清晰。建议用“as it could change our relationship”来表达因果关系。

× Yes, I have just borrowed money from my family because I don't want to borrow from my friends which could make a difference change between our relationship but for family we are take care of more closely.

✓ Yes, I have just borrowed money from my family because I don't want to borrow from my friends as it could change our relationship, but with family, we take care of each other more closely.

句中“we are take care of”动词形式错误，应为“we take care of”。“are”与“take”不应连用，正确用法是主语+动词原形。

× No, never, because I am a student at university now, because so I don't have the ability to earn money.

✓ No, never, because I am a student at university now, so I don't have the ability to earn money.

句中重复使用了“because”和“so”，导致句子结构混乱。应去掉多余的“because”，保持句子通顺。

× I couldn't lend money to others and I leave money from my parents.

✓ I couldn't lend money to others and I borrow money from my parents.

句中“leave money from my parents”用词错误，应为“borrow money from my parents”，表示“从父母那里借钱”。“leave”与语境不符。